Penulisan Article: My Unamed Story pt.2

posted by boomboombunni

"I'm glad to meet someone my age. I've lived here since I was eight, and I haven't seen any kids." She berkata her parents were wealthy wine makers. They couldn't take care of her, so they gave her a small amount of their fortune, and left her here. "Wow, your life sounds so difficult." "Yeah, it was, until i died." Andrew's face went bone white and he felt like collapsing. "I'm sorry, what? ALIVE? AS in, no longer living?" "Yeah! I thought anda knew!" Poor Andrew caved in on himself. The last thing he remembered was Elizabeth reaching out to catch him as he fell to the floor.

bri-marie Still the same thing - very rushed and confusing. There are no details, no descriptions. What does it mean that 'her' (I'm assuming 'she' is Elizabeth?) parents can't take care of her? They're obviously financially stable as they [i]gave[/i] her a small [i]fortune[/i]. They obviously care about her, since they gave her said fortune. She wasn't old enough to survive on her own. It doesn't make any sense. What do things look like? Smell like? Feel like? Sound like? What are the characters feeling - anxious, happy, sad? How old are they? What do they look like?

woofbark Right now, this is a good story. Add more detail, and it will be great. :D

boomboombunni okay listen! its a little rough i know! i will try to make it better!

Forbidden - Part 1

posted by kateeuy

It took some time for Scarlet to get her head around the fact that she was no longer human. Thoughts raced through her mind like a pack of wolves. Cravings. Her weakness. It was hard to resist the sweet lucious taste of human blood, running down her lips, into her mouth. So satisfying. She needed it, now, lebih than anything else. Standing in her bedroom facing the the moon shining brightly in night sky. She closed her eyes gently, breathing in and out. Scarlet felt a sudden chill rise up her back bone, her teeth gowing larger, sharper, ready to feed.

That calm thursday night, the moon was out...

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The Angel (a Cinta story)

posted by Rennerocks

There once was a girl, an angel, name Star, she was loved sejak everyone see met she loved them to.One hari see met a boy,also an Angel named Luke, she fell in Cinta when she looked into his deep brown eyes.He also fell in Cinta with her. They both were afraid to tell echother how they felt.

Luke wasn't going to give up untell he would finally tell her that he loved her.Star felt the same way.But they still berkata nothing to echother.

The days were going sejak fast,they only felt like years.Star and Luke's feelings became stronger.Luke finally got the nerve to tell bintang how he felt.Star was ready to so...

when it was me chapter one first sight

posted by xroylex

have anda ever felt like anda were trapped in the middle of something and anda felt like there was no way out? i have and to tell anda my story i have to start from the begining.

chapter one
first sight

i was 16 when i moved to america, it was different not like england it was warmer first and it felt weird i was use to covering up, but would that make me stand out? i looked around from where i was sitting, girls walking round in shorts and vest tops, guys the same yep i was deffenetly going to stand out if i wore my jumper skinnies and ugg boots. then a really depressing thought hit me.
tomorrow...

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Unspeakable

posted by irena83

Hear me,
hear my
unspeakable words,
those are screaming
inside my Lost strife!

See me,
see it through my
frightened eyes,
those will tunjuk you,
those will defeat
the peace itself.

That peace,
well-known to you,
but not to me.
Not to me.
I've seen it only
in their eyes,
while mine were dreaming.

Grabbing my soul,
living inside,
the fear loves me more,
smiling to my faith.

Hear me,
hear those
unspeakable words,
those are living here,
praying silently,
crying sternly.

Hope is awaken,
but weakened.
Hating fear
and its cruelty,
it struggles tirelessly,
though fading...

Fading
along with
unseen dreams,
sleeping
along with sorrow.

The doors
are locked,
Sun is not
illuminating
my path,
not mine.

Fears sleep
in there,
loving my failures,
listening to my
unspeakable words,
those are prayers,
unseen dreams,
fear lives within.

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The God Helpers: Chapter 2

posted by DxCFan123

I had just gotten to school, I had a STRONG feeling there is another god helper around here. I thought I was the only one on earth! I almost showed my powers. I have the powers on weather and ability to alih objects with my mind. When ever I alih objects with my mind, hand hands glow into black balls. My hands glowed a little black. But not completely. I was able to calm myself down fast enough for no one to see. As I walked into the classroom, I looked around. I saw a cute boy, the teacher had called him up, and called him Bruno, so I assumed that was his name. Then, the teacher called ME...

The Funny Thing About Bad Boys [part 2]

posted by Jamie105

I knocked on the large door and waited for her to open it. I didn't get the point of meeting here THEN going to the mall. The thought of Duncan made my blood boil. I don't know how this is gonna work. After that 3 saat thought, the short but pretty brunette girl I call my best friend opened up the door. She smiled then looked at my hair, "You're gonna go to the auditions and meet hot guys looking like THAT?" Then she grabbed my hand and dragged me upstairs.

"This outta work," she beamed, grabbing the straight iron and the hair brush and took a lock of my long blonde hair.

"How long is this...

The Children of the Gods

posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

It wasn’t a surprise when me and Kaden were almost struck sejak lightning AGAIN! Zeus was the god of the skies and he hated us. It wasn’t our fault our mom had a vengeful personality atau that Zeus couldn’t keep his pants up. I can never decide who has lebih blame but if they weren’t like this I wouldn’t be alive. I was the only one of Apollo’s kids to have the sun power which meant I warmed up faster so I easily dried after me and Kaden jumped in the lake to avoid the lightning. But Kaden was still soaked to the bone and some how his black hair and dark blue eyes seemed darker making...

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The girl who cried serigala, serigala, wolf chapter 5

posted by greenstergirl

This is what it looked like when Danny was getting her earth lesson.

I played with my new blue dress that I was telah diberi ever since I became soaked. After the elemental test they found me worthy as an ice serigala, wolf shape shifter.

I was sitting in an ice cave, east of the istana, castle where Zuka, the dog sejak the painting, was to train me. I have no one to train, there is no one who is the master of ice atau the wolf. But Zuka, the dog is close enough.

He sat across from me on the icy floor. A small api, kebakaran burned in the center of the room. It didn't seem to melt the ice.

"How are anda to help me Zuka? Are anda an ice elemental?"

"No. I'm actually not a human anda must know. I am full...

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My True Cinta Chapter 17. Jacobs POV

posted by Twilightsauce

Hi, this is the 17th chapter of My True Love. Some of anda may have not read it, if anda havent then please read on, but anda might want to go and check out the others first (they are all on my page) the next-and last!- chapter will be telah diposkan in a few days so, keep and eye out and I hope anda enjoy!
Love Twilightsauce

We had all come here for a picnic today, in the meadow, because it was a sunny day. We were all here the whole pack and all of the Cullen’s. The meadow was deserted and it looked peaceful and serene with pelangi, rainbow spots dancing around.
Nessie was heavily pregnant and our baby was due...

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Point Of No Return Chapter 1

posted by Harrypotter148

“Yes” Bree berkata as she approached the Healer with her head down, she was in a dimly light church, there were up at the alter there faces stiff. She had just accepted a role that she told herself she never would. A role that would end her life but save others, a role she was forced to except. Something she knew she was going to regret, but she berkata yes, it was too late. She was to lead the Healers into battle, fight for the right reasons but win for the wrong. She wanted to save people, but all she would be doing is damning their souls, so why was she doing this? She had to, to keep Jared...

Never Been In Cinta - Chapter One

posted by kateeuy

Amerie sat at her table, staring at a young man who sat directly opposite from her. He wore a black suit with a black and white mask covering his face. She turned around to seek her best friend Jen, smiling at her. Amerie then turned back around to see that the man had disappeared. The feel of someones breath suddenly blew on her neck. As she turned around, she saw the man standing behind her with his hand out. "Would anda like to dance" asked the man politely. "I'd Cinta to" Amerie replied, taking his hand.

As they danced under the sparkle of the disco ball, the energy of the night was exstatic....

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Hell's Outlaw

posted by HouseMindFreak

A story I am Penulisan about a American Indian boy of the Comanche tribe in Texas. He his cursed with a Supernatural evil but will have to confront his demon and the master of the Underworld realm which has plans for his curse...

Hell’s Outlaw

Chapter 1

In the town of Big Spring, Texas, a 12 tahun old Comanche Indian boy named Koda awoke that Saturday morning with a feeling of dread and excitement.
As with any boy approaching their 13th birthday in his tribe, he was to prepare for his spiritual quest but unlike the others before him, he did not look ke hadapan to it.
He has spent many arguments...

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brief analysis

posted by ryans_love

Temporary Home

For some people, this world is only a stopover. They arrive here to do some good while they can, but they know that this is still not their true home. They are Bidadari who come to light up our lives with their luminescence and to teach us what they can before they have to alih on. They flash in on golden wings, but it seems that they are gone before anda can say “Thank you” atau “I Cinta you”. They leave softly, without fanfare. They Ciuman our brow as lightly as a heart’s whisper, and smile, blinding us with its brightness. When we blink, they are gone.

Excert from novel

posted by TomboyWriter

She is crying but Kevin is staring with no care and walks away and Connor comes up behind me and kisses the back of my neck. Dylan and Mel are playing in the sand and Debbie and Dawn and Avril are dancing around with Damon. I smile this is how I want it to be. Me and Connor sway and he pulls me close and I lean back and he kisses my neck and soon I see Kira copying me and Cody copying Connor. I laugh and jump into Connors arms where he cradles me and he whispers “ how long till we get out of here and our honeymoon can start.” I chuckle and say “soon.” He smiles and sets me on my feet...

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Vampire Diaries

posted by mitchie19

I got bored in the laptop so I opened MS Word and start typing whatever. Then I come to this.
Plus I like Penulisan stories, so enjoy.
Note: Fan-made

I woke up in the middle of the night, feeling heavy and uneasy.
My mind rushed through the memories. I pushed myself back to sleep not remembering any parts happened earlier. Bonnie. Bonnie, I thought. She had been killed sejak Katherine. Oh, God. She can’t be! She can’t be dead! My fingers harden the bantal so I could hardly breathe. I felt moisture rushing to the surface of my eyes. I shouted, nor pouted. Though, no one can here me. Jeremy’s out...

My YouTube script

posted by JohnnyCadeskid

Music: Shattered

Keaira’s dad Johnny killed a soc when he was 16
This made many soc’s that already hated him for being a greaser hate him more
His parents had beat him making him have a horrible childhood
His best Friends were all he could count on
He then met his future wife Kim
He had Marshall
Then Keaira who care along with Reeve and Kaden
Then Kyra
Then Johnny Jr.
His friend Dally didn’t have a much better life
Dally grew up in New York on his own
He came to Oklahoma when he was 13
He there had a reputation as a criminal
He then became Friends with Johnny, Ponyboy, Sodapop, Steve, Darry, and Two-bit...

i havent got a title, could u give me some suggestions 1???

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

hei i dont know where to go with this 1 so any suggestions would b great thankx,

Usual morning, usual day, wake up, breakfast, school, go the long way home, then sit in my room the rest of the night. But today wasnt normal, nothing was right.

I woke up, and sniffed the air, but it wasnt the usuall lempeng, penkek i could smell, it was just the coldness, and the emptiness. i jumped down from my katil and ran down the stairs, into the kitchen, no one was there, not my Dad Membaca the paper at the table, his brows furrowed as he read the sport section. My mum wasnt wearing her bright apron, that was covered...

children called sprited.

posted by rosethorn

Hi my name is Rose and this is a story about an unknown power that took me from my sleep December 29 2999 to a noise out side my window. As I looked out I saw 3 children running around outside yelling at each other. As I stuck my head out my window to call down to them they looked up at me strait into my eyes so me being 16 started to bark crule words at them. The boys didn't respond until a called down to the little girl the only girl there and as I did the boys seemed to be lebih alert. But the girl just looked up at me. I ran down the steps so i could look at them eye to eye and as I stepped...

The mermaid. Or: A wonderful hari

posted by Aquamarina

At first I'd like to remark that english isn't my mothertongue. I tried hard to translate my little story into proper english, but maybe I made a few mistakes. However, I'm posting the english and the german version now, so just read them both if anda understand it. :)
Here it is:

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One wonderful day, it finally was at her feet. She hadn't seen it for days, and the longing had nearly cankered her. She had missed it like a lover atau a brother, no, more; like a piece of herself. It looked even lebih beautiful than in her memory, how it sprawled in the sun. She was surprised,...

Leaving Ilias: Swept Away Chap. 1

posted by ButteBaby_K

An image found that somewhat looks like the image of Phim I had in my head. ")

Chapter 1: Lost in my own world of thought, a common occurrence, the rain left me like always. I remained standing moving with breeze, as the rain receded leaving me pondering my thoughts. I smiled to myself. Ilias, my name was derived from his. I was born in a great time of sorrow, called Ravasn; for that was the name of death, which there was much of nearly 15 years lalu on the hari of my beginning. A massive drought had plagued Phim for 7 years for the rain spirit was greatly wounded sejak the indecency of my people. They had Lost his trust and his respect, and I was the solution. My mother had...