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posted by PeterPansgirl12
Ok, heres a story I've had in my head for a while...

I haunt her, I know I shouldn't. Being dead is boring. It's not like I chose death. Death just happened.

I was a normal seventeen tahun old guy, ready to start collge. Then, I saved her life. She means everything to me.
I Cinta everything about her. Her hair, her smile, her lips, her body, her laugh, her snort, her mad face, her happy face, her flirty face, her attitude.

I Cinta her.

That's why I pushed her out of the way when the murderer shot the gun. That's why I saved her life.

Now, I haunt her. I watch her every minit of everyday, as a ghost.
But, only a ghost. I can't touch her atau talk to her. I've tried my hand only goes through her 'flesh' body.

Many times I've ached to talk to her and hold her in m arms. Especially when she cries herself to sleep.

She tries to act Brave during the hari but at night I watch her cry and whisper my name.

It breaks my ghost heart. People say ghost don't have feelings but they do. Oh, they do.

I now was watching her sleep in her huge bedroom that I remember we slept once.

Her breathing was coming softly. That cute way she always had of breathing through her nose when she slept.
I sat my ghostly body down on the katil and just looked at her.

Her curly brown was in tangles from tossing and turning. Her black, long eyelashes sometimes fluttered as if she was in a dream.
And her lips, oh her lips were as red as ever. Even lebih kissable and sweet.

Her eyes shot open as if she sensed another being with her. Her eyes scanned the room then rested on me. She hesitated as if seeing me but not really seeing.

"Madison," I whispered and laid down beside her.

She looked around, "Whose there?"
I, at first, was shocked. Normally she could not hear me. But, now it seemed she could.

"It's me Zach," I whispered placing my hand on her arm.
She shivered, "Go away. Please leave me alone. It isn't Zach. It will never be Zach."
Tears filled up her eyes and she shuddered.

"It is me. But, I'm a ghost," I said.
"Prove it," she answered. Ah, thats the Madison I knew and loved. She was always suspicious and non beliving.

"The first time we kissed I ended up biting your lip," I told her laughing a little.

Her eyes widened, "Where are you?"

"I'm a ghost. I'm right beside you," I answered smiling at her confused and utterly cute face.

I ran my hand over her head and she shivered, her skin got the goosebumps.

"Oh, Zach," she whispered turning her head, not realizing my face was now inches away.

"I Cinta you. I'll Cinta anda forever," I told her. she started crying.

"I Cinta you. And I always will. Remember we promised to Cinta each other forever and always?" she whispered. She started hiccuping. I chuckled at her beautiful face.

"I'll watch over you, Maddie. I'll be your guardian angel. I'll never leave your side," I said.
"Zach, I hate my life. I want to be with you," she sobbed.
"You will, someday. Someday, you'll die then we can both go to heaven, together," I reassured her.

"Someday..." she repeated dreamily. I planted a Ciuman on her lips that were wet with tears. I tried to bungkus, balut my arms around her but they only went through her soft skin.

"Go to sleep. I'll be with you. I know I won't be able to talk to anda all the time but know I will always be with you," I whispered in her ear.

She closed her eyes, "I Cinta you, Zach."
"I Cinta anda too."

~*~*~*~*~*~ 60 years later

I did watch over her. We did talk some. My beautiful Madison grew up and became a public school teacher.
I watched her with delight and at nights we would talk. Even though she couldn't feel me I always held her.

Madison died one fall day, from a stroke. I carried her off to heaven.

We now are ghosts, together. She looks young again and beautiful, but she always was beautiful.

I remember the days I used to watch over her, she never married...
posted by irena83
Chapter 5: News

Suddenly, she felt weird.
She went quickly at the bathroom
and laved herself.
She looked pale and was feeling sick.
She closed her eyes and tried to
take a deep breath.
Now she felt little better.
She took a phone and called a neighbor,
telling her that she must see a doctor
and someone should take care of Gwenny.
Joanna berkata that there were no reason
to be worried about and she would
look after baby.
Dana, thankful and scared the same time,
got dressed quickly and immediately
called a cab.
While she was waiting for a cab,
she was so confused and tense.
The cab came soon.
She barely could...
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their are six technique(originally theirs eight but i only know six)


technigue one:Start with a short,effective sentence(4-5 words max): Her hair shone gold.

technique two:Start with an interesting metaphor atau simile: The serigala, wolf was like a tornado,changing the lives of all who crossed his path.

technique three:Start with a literary device(ex.onomatopoeia,alliteration,etc):Gobbling Grandma and her grandchild was his plan all along.

technique four:Start with a prepositional phrase: ALong the spooky road to Grandma's house,Red skipped with an air of confidence.

technique five:Start with a riddle and...
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posted by sweetpea92
    Everyday at lunch for all of high school so far I would stand in line and wait to get up to the front to tell the lunch lady that “I need a to-go tray please.” Then once I had gotten my tray, I would scan my lunch card and dash down the hallway to my kegemaran teacher’s room to sertai “the lunch bunch” on everyday except Wednesday, and Friday. On those days the beginning of this routine is relatively the same, but instead of heading off to another meeting of the lunch bunch, I would take a detour at the perpustakaan to sertai my Friends at our usual table, for either...
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posted by Firewriter
There was once a boy
Who loved a girl
A very distant girl- haunted sejak her demons that no one else could see
The boy- lonely and afraid of pursuing his passions
The heat of the mid-July sun beating on their backs
On a little dirt road seterusnya to a vine-covered wall
That little boy handed the little girl a kapur, limau nipis green envelope
Her name printed on that envelope in his fine pen writing

Their cheeks red and hearts pounding
The two continued their days apart
Both afraid their darkness will come over
And destroy what they tried to break
The hari to follow, that little broken girl
Smiling a real smile for the first...
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First Step In Penulisan A Screenplay sejak Richard Walter
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richard walter
ucla
screenplay
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penulis
how to write a screenplay
added by vampiress015
Also very funny, don't anda just wish anda could do these things yourself?
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Penulisan
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added by HarryPLover
 Surviver of The Thing prequel that is till the end that was the beginning of The Thing 1984
Surviver of The Thing prequel that is till the end that was the beginning of The Thing 1984
How to survive a horror movie apocalypse. sejak L.R.Talbot
This is a senarai of things to keep in mind in order to survive a horror movie. Note most of these can be used in a daily life as well.
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1.If there's someone at the door never say whose there
2.never put your back against a door. anda never know if someone has enough strength to put a pisau through the door plus there's the mail slot to consider.
3.Try to be as quiet as possible especially if they(your attacker atau possible attacker) are near by
4.Find a weapon as soon as possible. In my opinion preferably something that could...
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posted by Ragefulchimp
Vandals and crooks
an aging man, caught like a ikan on a hook
Getting reeled in, he's easy prey
Eyes sag, creating bags, pupils widen, creating paralysis

Confusion and fear
An ailing man, with ikan hooks everywhere
The biggest catch today
Pavement runs red, creating pain, flesh torn, creating animals

Torment and Horror
An aching man, aches no more
The ikan hook rips away
Smiles widen, creating youth, blood drips, creating paralysis
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posted by para-scence
"We've got to tell Mom," I berkata quickly. "She'll get Matt to actually pay it this time." I hoped I was right. He would, wouldn't he? He couldn't just let his girlfriend suffer. I picked up Auburn, and Sage held my hand as the five of us set out to Matt's house.

It was dark, and I was getting really anxious. During the day, the neighborhood was fine. But during the night... it was frightening. This place turned into a battle ground; shootings everywhere. It hasn't been so bad lately. The cops got rid of most of them. But anda could never be too careful.

Matt's house was bigger than ours; it had...
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posted by para-scence
I got home, where Reed was at the dapur meja, jadual playing poker with some Friends and smoking. I walked up to the meja, jadual and threw the bag onto the table. His Friends all looked at it, gaping. Reed laughed.

"Good job, baby sister!" he said. He took the bag and inspected it. I smiled at his praise. He looked up at me and smiled. "But shouldn't anda be at school? If Nikolai finds out he'll bust your head in."

"So don't let him find out," I berkata like it was an obvious answer. His buddies laughed. Reed shook his head at me, but a smile still played on his lips. He threw the bag back at me.

"Well then,...
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posted by mitchie19
2. B I G D A Y

One, two, three, go! I breathed. My right leg went first up the stairs and then my left leg.
This is it, this is really it. I squealed nervously. “Marhion Angeles Pearson, daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pearson” the school directress announced. I went up the stage. The audience clapped.
I felt like a bintang on a rise.
I saw Riley on the crowd, my eyes glued to him. Ah! I tripped. The audience gasp some stood up to see if I’m okay some of them laughed and snickered. drake Cell, the school news anchor video taped my clumsiness, he smiled. I quickly stood up. My cheeks were red, I...
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posted by ChickRiddler
Preface: We were called freaks. Strangers. Mutants. As my claws ripped through the peculiar woman’s skin I thought, “What am I now?” My teeth sunk into her arm. The screech that pierced the air at that moment brought me back to reality, I was human again. I spat the blood out of my mouth and looked around myself. The handsome man was looking at me with terrified eyes.
    “I’m so sorry,” I whispered. Shrinking into myself, I began to run away. The man wouldn’t catch me. But something held me back. I went back to him and reappeared. “Help me.” I wasn’t even sure he heard me I berkata it so low. Suddenly, my body couldn’t take the pain. There was a buzzing in my ears, a pounding in my head, and spots in my vision. It was then the darkness swallowed me whole.
posted by Lolo-star20
If I'm a reason to leave
I don't talk about this on a sheet
I want to everybody see
What anda do of me

I'm become a princess
with a knight who not fearless
I want to watch a cloudless sky
because my hati, tengah-tengah and my eyes cry

Chorus
It is what I want
It is what I need
And never other thing
that the Cinta which I want

The only thing I know
It's I'm better when anda are
Near to me, did anda know?
And I want that anda are

Chorus

It's like
I have a pisau in my back
It's like
I don't can stay in the black
Without what I want
Without what I need

Chorus x3

You're all I want
I'll be what anda need
And ever other thing
If it's what anda want
Chapter Twenty One

Michael stared at his wife and then, to the stranger standing seterusnya to Mac before heading back to Jamie and asked her a question, “Jamie, what was going around here?”

Shocked of seeing her husband here instead of later, Jamie put Izzie down and watching the little girl running off to her father and started tugging Michael’s sleeve to tell him that she want him to pick her in his arms right away, Jamie stared at her husband picking Izzie up and holding her into his arms while asking him, “Michael, why are anda here this early?”

Staring at his wife’s face and while holding...
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posted by ChiliPepperLuv
People say Bunga are beautiful.
They're beautiful, that's true.
They also provide oxygen for us.
People say weeds are ugly.
They apparently have no value,
Nor do they deserve to live.
I'm not talking weeds that grow in the garden.
I'm talking about wild plants.
Well, weeds are flowers, too.
Just give them a chance.
Once anda get to know them, they're amazing.
They can be just as pretty as flowers.
I may not be an orchid atau a sunflower.
I may not be a rose atau an iris.
I'm lebih of a dandelion.
I may be a weed, but I'm not so bad.
Give me half a chance. I'm pretty neat.
So, weeds are flowers, too.
Get to know them. They're pretty great.
added by XRoryX
Source: Quote sejak Steven Pressfield