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posted by alejpatv
 Please be aware that my main character is a guy...
Please be aware that my main character is a guy...
When I woke up, the flames had already claimed the village. The moon still shone bright as I hurried to get outside. Everyone was yelling, calling those who were asleep to help put out the flames. Throwing on some clothes, I ran out of my burning utama into the chaos. My family’s small cottage burned amongst the other buildings. Instinctively, my hand flew to my chest to make sure it was still there. I sighed in relief as I felt the cold touch of the moonstone brush under my fingertips. selamat, peti deposit keselamatan underneath my shirt.
    Relieved to find it still there, I ran to the river so as to help the other elves put out the flames. I grabbed a bucket sejak the trees and turned to the river. But the bucket was caught. I looked back to see what the bucket could be caught on.
    A hand gripped the rim. I looked around the pokok to see who could possibly be playing such a prank at a time like this. The hand belonged a small elf who seemed to be asleep. I’ve seen him once and awhile playing with the younger elves.
    “Come on,” I berkata gently shaking his shoulder in an attempt at waking him. “We’re all tired, but we still need to help with the flames all the same.” He fell on his side. “Stop playing,” I scolded and reached for him, and found the arrow.
    It was buried in his back. I hadn’t seen it before because of the dark. I snatched my hand away, a cold feeling grabbing hold of me. I looked around to find help, and instead I found the others.
    They covered the ground leading to the river. They had come for water to put out the fire, just as I had. But something had ambushed them. It was nothing like I had ever seen before. Their blood mixed and formed puddles. Every one of them butchered in the most inhumane way possible. My whole body shivered, my legs threatened to give out.
My parents, where was my family? I searched the body's, hoping to not find them among the corpses. But there they were. Their arms intertwined around each other. Not even separated sejak death. I wailed into the night, and fell to my knees. These were my parents, my family. My tears mixed with their blood on the ground as the api, kebakaran blazed behind us. An emptiness grew in my chest, where their Cinta had once been. Sobs racked my body. I looked into their empty eyes, willing them to regain the glow they had while living. I grabbed their hands and hugged them tightly to my chest. I knew, deep down that these hands would never again be warm.
Tears burned down my face, I couldn’t leave them out in the cold like this. They deserved much lebih than a cold bloody ground. Slowly and softly, I began the traditional spell of death. I felt their hands harden and twist in my own hands. I shut my eyes, unwilling to watch the change overcoming their bodies.
The spell wore on. Soon I had to release their hands atau forever be caught within their grasp. I could hear their forms creak and grown as their forms grew taller and harder. The rustling of their leaves as they stretched out.
    Then it was finished. I opened my eyes to look at the two oak trees that now stood in front of me. Their roots were intertwined around each other, just how they would like to be. A sob caught in my throat, I rubbed the tears from my eyes furiously. They wouldn’t like to see me atau my sister crying over them like this.
My sister. I looked up, my tears forgotten. Where was my sister? I searched the bodies, not daring to hope that she might still be alive. I blinked back the tears that threatened to come out of my eyes, where was she?
The #1 Most Important Element In Developing Character sejak John Truby
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posted by jklilly56
I dont know what to call my book yet the tajuk is whats blocking my thoughts. yet but if anda can give me some feed back that would be awsome!

“Hey are anda guys almost here yet?” I asked my best friend Rose. “Oh yeah I see anda now. Okay see anda in a sec.” We were at the event of the tahun for us, the National Western Stock tunjuk PBR finals. Rose was meeting me at one of the rest rants in the stock yards (some of the cheapest and best Makanan is sold there.) Rose was bringing her boyfriend, Matt, with her and so she was late. “Rose over here!” I berkata waving her over. She came over to the...
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posted by HarryPLover
looked in the mirror and saw that ugly girl
That girl that constantly reminded of who I was,
Of what I was.
I was a murder
People say My parents death wasn’t my fault
I killed them
I felt guilty
I felt ashamed
I was the one to blame
My life flashed before my eyes
I saw the fire, the crash
I saw the flames erupt inside me
I felt tears burn my eyelids
I felt it as much they did
They burned, I burned
I didn't want to be left alone
I never wanted them to leave
Though I was taken from them
They were also taken from me
Though they're gone,
We both pay the price
Death
And Scars.
posted by twilight-rocks9
please tell me if anda like it.


The rest of the night i didn't sleep. When it was time to wake up jose found the package dad sent. His was like mine but he had a skull ring and a skull and crossed Bones necklace. He loved it i still disapproved of it. And suprise suprise Brandon had the same one. I stopped talking to near everyone until i can understand what was happening. Tyler tried to get me to talk but i couldn't till today. "Babe please say something i want to hear your voice." he pleaded. "Don't worry Tyler it's better this way." Maybel said. That was it i hated her lebih then ever. "Maybel...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
That night I locked my windows it seems it only really brings me trouble. But again I couldn’t sleep. “Knock, knock” Dawn berkata coming in her voice was gentle. “Hey, you’re up late” I berkata getting out of bed. “Yeah, what did Ethan do?” she said, Dawn could read your anger. “Nothing, there was just a misunderstanding, that’s all” I said. “Really?” she said. “Well we kissed” I berkata now sitting on my bed. She followed and sat down seterusnya to me. “Wow, Why?” she asked, “Why would anda ask me why?” I asked. “Because anda have always berkata that anda would never go...
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posted by XhuddyobsessedX
I looked out the window at the man I wanted to be with. He doesn't know my name atau that I watch him leave for work everyday. He doesn't even know I live seterusnya door to him. But, one hari that will change.
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The seterusnya hari I brought myself to go meet the man I had watched from my window for so many years. I wanted to know evetything about him. And most of all, I wanted him to know everything about me. From the saat I saw him I knew we were ment to be.

I went up to his door and knocked on it. It opened. He looked at me with curiosity.

"Can I help you?"

"Um..yes...
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posted by NagisaTomoya
The hari anda Slipped Away
    I will start off my story sejak telling anda this: Karma is very real. In fact, that is me. I am Karma, though I prefer the name “Exodus.” Karma sounds a bit too feminine for such a strong and mighty force like myself. I, Exodus, have come to write a story for you. If anda are expecting a cute and fun filled story get out while anda still can. Close this book and get on with your life. Forget about me, even though anda will surely encounter me in the rest of your lifetime. anda just won’t know when I am approaching anda from behind atau staring you...
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A Spec Screenplay Rivalry & Friendship With Shane Black sejak Joe Eszterhas from STORY EXPO 2014 via link lebih video interviews at link
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posted by vanelandsisters
The Queen walks into Amy's and Sonia's bedroom, where her children are having a slumber party with their friends. The girls's best friends, Cream and Bunnie, had recently been telah diberi up sejak their mother because their father had passed and she didn't know what to do with her daughters. They'd been staying at the palace for a few months while Aleena and Jonathan decided what to do with them.

Queen Aleena: "Sorry to interrupt, guys. Can I borrow Cream and Bunnie for a bit?"

Sonic: "Sure, Mom. Just bring them back within two hours. And anda know that I'll be waiting!"

The Queen shakes her head and the...
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posted by vanelandsisters
Told By: Sonic J. Aleena (and when Sonic's a baby) Shadow the hedgehog atau Miles 'Tails' J. Prower


Chapter 1: Turned Into a Baby

I waved 'bye' to Tails and ran off. I went to the forest at Möbotropolis Park. My siblings were at home. I started to attack Butt-nik's robots- even the two main idiotic ones. I said, "Alright, Ro-butt-nik. Enough is enough, egghead." I looked around desperately for a hiding place before he caught me. I saw a bunch of plants, so I ran towards them. I hid under a belukar, bush and waited for the perfect moment to attack Ro-butt-nik. I had a smirk on my face, cause he'd no idea...
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posted by vanelandsisters
(If anda get sad easily, don't read this!)

Told by: Amelia-Rose J. Aleena


Chapter 1: Sonia's Wedding

I was in my room, getting in my maid of honor dress and accessories. I was very excited, for my sister, Sonia, was getting married. I heard a knock on my door and answered it. It was my brother, Manic. "We've gotta be out there in five minutes, sis. Not trying to rush you, but you've got to hurry up. See anda out there with Sonia and Jacob." I nodded and answered, "Yep. See you, Manic." I was having a lot of trouble putting on my pearl necklace, for I had to hide my medallion under it. I finally...
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