Penulisan Article: BYE BYE 2011

BYE BYE 2011

posted by r260897

now standing on last hari of tahun
i look back and see smiles and tears
somedays it was new too
somedays our mailboxes were filled with greetings
greetings of arrival of 01/01/2011
hari sejak hari we got used to
night sejak night we got close
so many starts so many ends
so many left so many got friends
learnt so much taught so much
learnt to smile learnt to give
learnt to die learnt to live
with loads of hugs and kisses
bye bye 2011
seterusnya time we'll say
"damn our hati, tengah-tengah still misses
THE 2011"
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.they wanted a longer artikel :P

tijgerin6 BYE BYE 2011 Happy New Year!

r260897 to you tooo

coriann :)

r260897 :)

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Kyle:Krissa, it's ok, everything will be fine.

Krissa:No it won't!!!How can he do this to me!...how can he do this to us!

Me:He didn't...he did it to be happy.

Krissa looked at me with watery eyes, tears falling, dripping from her face.

Kyle:Kris, he is your father, but he just needs to alih on and live a happier life.

Me:Exactly, he never wanted to hurt anda like this, he loves you, but he loves her, too.

Krissa:If he did Cinta me, he'd dump that barbie!

Kyle looked at me, I looked at him.

Kyle:She needs some time alone.

I nodded.
I hurt the thump sound of when Krissa jumps on her bed.

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Kyle:Or a few years...why is she so...upset of her dad getting married?

Me:Well, when she went to visit him, she was just there, he never told her.She got mad and came right back.

Kyle:Well that IS upsetting.

Me:No kidding.

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