Penulisan Article: hati, tengah-tengah of the soilder

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posted by delta117

i awoke pain everywhere it felt like my skin was melting but yet i did not scream traing kicked in and i found my black armoar to any normal sentient bieng it would be like an anchor but i am not normal am i after that i grabbed my weapons the first was a set of 2 curved assian knifes curved and made for my hands saat standard ar senapang it had no scope only sights all i needed to kill at 100 yards third a shotgun normal used in swat teams tactical 12 guage shot gun pam action forth 44mm glock i holousterd it and my knifes my knifes at arm length pistol on my hip then an explosion rocked my cell and soilders poured in i dispathed them with my a.r 5 dead hundreds to go i stepped outr my cell through the hole my enemy s made my radio head set in my topi keledar crackled to life " mac come in mack this is alpha team we are in poisition" i paused looked for any lebih targets and replied " copy that alpha team this is mac i am on my way any word frombeta atau omega?" " beta's in poistion no word from alpha but stats says they're alive alpha team out" good know i could get my three teams out of this base and get back to the HQ. down a carfully polished corridor i searched for the enemy no sighn it was eerily quiet the only noises were the sound of my boots hitting thewaxed floor and my silent controled breathing that was bad.after three floors up i found some action i had switched to my shotgun for close combat. two teams of well trained soilders 2 sets of Pistol aimed at my head 2 easy. each team consitsted of five soilders so there wetre tenguns pointed at me i had a small windo w of 3 minit to kill them atau they would have help so i targetetd the first team i shot two of them dead an injured one there i shot the injurd one and got knocked on my back sejak a smg i lifted my pistol up as i fell and shot my shooter in his face he crumpled to the ground then the other was stuned a how i had killed his theam in four saat i keep time on this stuff then i knocked him in the neck with the handel of my gun and he fell to the groungd he had a broken thacea and larenix instant death i reholstered my pistol and and picked up an anti-personal fragmentatin grenade from a dead soilderpulled the pin and threw it at team 2 it landed in the center and blosumed into a firey bunga of shrapnel i pulled my pisol back out and checked the bodies one injure d1 shot in the head changed that all others dead in 7 saat i was good

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Cullen-fan That was really good do you write alot?

harold This was a little hard to read at first, since there was hardly any punctuation at all, but by the end I was getting into it more. You might play with verb tense a bit more if you are going for the stream-of-consciousness writing; present tense and 1st person perspective work well together, particularly if you intend to spell words phonetically because the character wouldn't know any better. A good example of this (in my opinion) is the novel [u]Feersum Endjin[/u] - large parts are written in first person, present tense, from the perspective of a warrior who spells everything phonetically. I think moving into present tense would make the other stuff seem more intentional. I'm interested to see more, and particularly curious about the cause of the pain he feels in the beginning. I also like the humorous bits, like the aside "i keep time on this stuff" in the middle of the fight. Some suggestions: proofread after taking a break from writing the piece, so that you can view it with fresh eyes. The spelling may be intentional, and it works, but the words blending together "soilderpulled", "tenguns", "thewaxed" don't work as well for me. Also, you should check which team is talking to which team: "no word from alpha but stats says they're alive alpha team out" Whether or not you decide to switch it to present tense, it's got a lot of energy and it flows quickly. I'm interested to see where you go with it.

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There is no tajuk yet...

posted by flabaloobalah

CHAPTER ONE: "CARTER"

There’s one silent sensation of falling really fast and really hard. Then it’s over. Just like that. Somewhere off in the distance, a girl screams. Maybe she’s seterusnya to me and my damaged ears are playing tricks on me. atau maybe she really is far away from here, wherever that is.
A flame billowing over a folded up car flicks its vile tongue. The api, kebakaran reflects in the pools of blood and the bodies. Five bodies, and myself, still alive. Sirens wail and rescue teams and news vans swarm the scene. I moan and grip my chest, waiting for someone to notice...

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True Cinta Revealed

posted by Triscia95

“Caroline I’ve tried everything to prove my self time after time that I Cinta you, that I would do anything for you, I’d never let anyone hurt you.” Klaus paused as Caroline stood in the door looking down at the hardwood floor tears rolling down her eyes. “That I would die for you.” He finished. Klaus took one step towards Caroline but as he did she took two steps away.

Klaus’s grieved face turned masam and full of anger. Nothing he did atau berkata made her realize that if she asked anything he would do it with out a saat thought. She shook her head and raced out the door.

He wasn’t...

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Bidadari and Demons

posted by Insight357

An Angel
A Demon
A battle
Raging in
The night sky

Asphyxiation
A sweet sensation
No one knows the
Beckoning thought
In the bounds of your
Mind

The Angel knelt down
On the cold winters ground
Spoke a soft prayer
Looked into the empty night air
Saw an image of himself

Asphyxiation
A sweet sensation
No one knows the
Beckoning thought
In the bounds of your
Mind

The demon summoned all his courage
And broke through the cage
He found no reason
He drew back his army
And walked to the Angel in harmony
With a fanged smile
From the demon
A wicked gleam
From the angel
They made their truths

Asphyxiation
A sweet sensation
No one knows the
Beckoning thought
In the bounds of your
Mind

No battle
No challenge
Peace
Amongst two forces
Now bonded
Inseparable

A boy who loves spots

posted by Nesrino

Once upon a time, there was a 15 tahun old boy named Will who loved sports as if they were his whole life. From the beginning of his first hari at school, Will tried out for the Bola sepak team and they were amazed how talented this boy was at sports at such a young age. When Will became 12 years of age, he had won the scool over 20 awards for each soccer, bola keranjang and Tenis competition they entered. He has also become very fit and well-built from all his exercising and sports, and seems to think that being fit was one of the most important things a person should accomplish in life. Will has always...

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Why i need anda

posted by mars15

I need you
from the first moment i saw you
I need you
because you're the air i breathe
I need you
because you're the water i drink
I need you
because just the thought of seeing anda makes me want to get out of bed
I need you
because anda can with just one smile make my whole world starts to turning again
I need you
because anda make me wake up from my the most horrible nightmare without fear
I need you
because anda can give me hope when i don't have one
I need you
because even if I'm at the bottom,you're always there to help me stand up
I need you
because in this cruel world anda keep me alive
I need you
because i know that you'll never give up from me
I need you
because when no one believed in me anda were there to stand up for me
I need you
because you're everything for me
But the most important thing why i need anda is
because I'll always Cinta you!

This was in my head so i just thought to write it

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Power cuts!!

posted by nimone

Let's be honest we have all at least once in our lives experienced the misfortune that is the power cut.

The power cut it'self may not be as intolerable depending on the circumstance. If anda live in a place where it is sunny and there is a lot to do outside then anda don't have much to worry about.
I for one do live in this kind of climate usually. This however was not the case yesterday!

Not only was it the only hari of the week where everything is closed as it was a Sunday, oh no it was also pouring down raining!

I was forced indoors with nothing to do and it was really dark inside due to the...

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Your life

posted by irena83

Life,
priceless and important,
gives anda the roads
and leaves anda choices
of which your luck depends on.

This is your life
and anda live it
wrapped sejak sadness
atau happiness.
Who cares?

This is your life,
invisible for others.

anda pick the road
and pray that the choice
is right,
but life loves anda not,
that's anda who Cinta
the joy of life.

Life,
priceless and important,
gives anda choices,
unpredictable events,
grays and hope,
and life is all yours.

But, the soalan is
will anda remain sane
even though your life
is cruel to your dreams,
will anda remain sane
even when your life
is dying in your eyes.

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Grey house

posted by irena83

Chapter 5: News

Suddenly, she felt weird.
She went quickly at the bathroom
and laved herself.
She looked pale and was feeling sick.
She closed her eyes and tried to
take a deep breath.
Now she felt little better.
She took a phone and called a neighbor,
telling her that she must see a doctor
and someone should take care of Gwenny.
Joanna berkata that there were no reason
to be worried about and she would
look after baby.
Dana, thankful and scared the same time,
got dressed quickly and immediately
called a cab.
While she was waiting for a cab,
she was so confused and tense.
The cab came soon.
She barely could...

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Intreresting Openings Technique

posted by Choco7

their are six technique(originally theirs eight but i only know six)

technigue one:Start with a short,effective sentence(4-5 words max): Her hair shone gold.

technique two:Start with an interesting metaphor atau simile: The serigala, wolf was like a tornado,changing the lives of all who crossed his path.

technique three:Start with a literary device(ex.onomatopoeia,alliteration,etc):Gobbling Grandma and her grandchild was his plan all along.

technique four:Start with a prepositional phrase: ALong the spooky road to Grandma's house,Red skipped with an air of confidence.

technique five:Start with a riddle and...

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School Lunches (an assignment)

posted by sweetpea92

Everyday at lunch for all of high school so far I would stand in line and wait to get up to the front to tell the lunch lady that “I need a to-go tray please.” Then once I had gotten my tray, I would scan my lunch card and dash down the hallway to my kegemaran teacher’s room to sertai “the lunch bunch” on everyday except Wednesday, and Friday. On those days the beginning of this routine is relatively the same, but instead of heading off to another meeting of the lunch bunch, I would take a detour at the perpustakaan to sertai my Friends at our usual table, for either...

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The api, kebakaran of a Memory

posted by Firewriter

There was once a boy
Who loved a girl
A very distant girl- haunted sejak her demons that no one else could see
The boy- lonely and afraid of pursuing his passions
The heat of the mid-July sun beating on their backs
On a little dirt road seterusnya to a vine-covered wall
That little boy handed the little girl a kapur, limau nipis green envelope
Her name printed on that envelope in his fine pen writing

Their cheeks red and hearts pounding
The two continued their days apart
Both afraid their darkness will come over
And destroy what they tried to break
The hari to follow, that little broken girl
Smiling a real smile for the first...

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First Step In Penulisan A Screenplay sejak Richard Walter

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First Step In Penulisan A Screenplay sejak Richard Walter

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Also very funny, don't anda just wish anda could do these things yourself?

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How to survive a horror movie apocalypse

posted by axemnas

Surviver of The Thing prequel that is till the end that was the beginning of The Thing 1984

How to survive a horror movie apocalypse. sejak L.R.Talbot
This is a senarai of things to keep in mind in order to survive a horror movie. Note most of these can be used in a daily life as well.
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1.If there's someone at the door never say whose there
2.never put your back against a door. anda never know if someone has enough strength to put a pisau through the door plus there's the mail slot to consider.
3.Try to be as quiet as possible especially if they(your attacker atau possible attacker) are near by
4.Find a weapon as soon as possible. In my opinion preferably something that could...

I write my hati, tengah-tengah on a paper

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