Penulisan Article: Broken Dreams Chapter 5

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posted by BellaSwan636

Tia

When it comes to relationships, I'm no idiot. I could totally see what was coming. But come on; who didn't?

The new girl and Shaun. Plus he didn't like attack her atau anything when she sat at his table. What was so special about her, anyway?

Sure she was pretty, but there where way prettier girls, who'd each thrown themselves at him, (he wasn't that bad looking, actually) he'd ignored since freshmen year.

I flicked my hair over my shoulder. I could see she liked him too, she'd looked around the cafeteria yesterday and looked way disappointed when he wasn't there.

So I waited a little after school till I saw Shaun walking out of the building. I strode towards him. I was going to make him see the light.

Shaun

I never much attention to Tia Johnson, but when she started walking towards me, she was wearing that 'business' look on her face, which meant either one of two things: one, I'd offended her best friend. Two, I was ignoring her best friend.

She reached me before I could reach my car. She was a a good eight inches shorter than me, but I was suddenly fearing for my life.

"Why are anda such an idiot?" she half screeched at me.

"What do anda mean?"
"Ask her out, for the Cinta of my personal sanity!"
"Ask who out?" I said, sounding like a total idiot.
"Serena!" she has seized the front of my shirt, pulling me down to her level of around 4.8 with surprising force.

"She likes you, and I, as well as the entire tenth grade, knows you like her!" she continued, ferociously.

"Will anda please let go of my shirt?"

"Sorry," she muttered relinquishing her grip.
"Thanks," I said.

Tia abruptly turned around and walked away.

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Evil, Darkness & Light

posted by juicyjossy9

Did God Create Evil?

The universiti professor challenged his students with this question:

"Did God create everything that exists?"

A student bravely replied, "Yes, he did!"

"God created everything?" The professor asked.

"Yes sir", the student replied.

The professor answered, "If God created everything, then God created evil, since evil exists, and according to the principal that our works define who we are, then God is evil".

The student became quiet before such an answer.
The professor, quite pleased with himself, boasted to the students that he had proven once lebih that the Christian faith was a...

John Muir Middle School Character senarai

posted by steph1011994

John Muir Middle School

Alexa Lightman: a girl with braces who wants to make a difference. Age 11
Deandra Cody: a formerly chubby Hispanic girl who loves drawing. Age 12
Katie Eckert: a pigtailed bola keranjang player who wants to be bintang forward. Age 12
Emma Walsh: a young brunette girl who plays Bola sepak to win. Age 13
Colleen Tepper: a blonde girl who strives to be a champion figure skater. Age 13
Hannah Slater: a girl with curly brown hair who is a violin prodigy. Age 14
Brooke Paxton: a Hispanic girl who play guitar. Age 11
Brigit Banks: a bun wearing blonde Irish dancer who is very serious and competitive....

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Character Development!!!!

posted by breebree446

Although JP doesn't really describe his characters that much, he gives enough about Iggy to know he's blind, a pyro, and has strawberi blonde hair!

Although JP doesn't really describe his characters that much, he gives enough about Iggy to know he's blind, a pyro, and has strawberry blonde hair!

So, we have the plot line and idea prepared. But what about the thing that makes it all come to life? The characters. This is a little artikel on character development.

Appearence!

anda know the old saying, "Appearence is everything."? Well, it's not! But it IS important when writing. As anda go along, think about what your character looks like. What's thier hair color? What kind of body type do they have. What's thier eye color. I'll admit i'm not a big peminat of the "Hi. My name is _____ I have brown hair and blue eyes." What I do is describe the characters subtly. Like if one character describes...

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anda and Me-Chapter 3

posted by Twilightluv3r

For the past three weeks Taylor and I haven't been getting along so well. All we do is argue about every little thing. Most of the time it's because we never have time to spend with each other.
He's still acting, but he's only getting small parts, so he thought he needed to practice his acting. It was so hard trying to be a bestfriend on his schedule, so we decided to distance ourselves, a little, for a week. The first two days were like hell. I did't want to talk to anyone except for Taylor. I would have talked to Amy, but she was sick.
But then everything turned around when Mark and I started...

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ALONE

posted by odekanmi

I told someone once,
"You are alone".
The person refused to agree,
"Why?",
"What for?",
"Why should i be told I'm alone"
Those were the words most probably flowing through the fellas mind at the time,
Think of it,
Stop,
Take a deep breath,
Think again,
Who were anda with the last second?,
You, yourself and you,right?,
Look around you,
Are anda sure this is where anda want to be?,
I look,
Right now,
And,you know what I see?,
No one.
Nada Nada person,
Well that's my own language, forget it.
There's no one there,
But I do what I do best,
Suffer in silence.

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The plot for my unnamed story

posted by deathchick9

Syayuki Kimihiro,is a normal Japaneses high school girl trying to find her place and make friends,but when she was 5 she was taken from her home,she has many nightmares about this event even after 11 years,These nightmares consist of demons monsters and gargoyles.Her family says that it's normal sines she was found unconscious with no memories of this horrible event,now she has episodes where she has excruciating chest pain till she falls unconscious.Her mother being a doctor was able to make a vaccine for her but it only works for one day.Suddenly four new students appear making her episodes and nightmares worse.As if that's not bad enough now there are strange marks on her left wrist that hurt like hell.Do these new students have something to do with it and why is the leader constantly flirting with her?

Yeah, Me; The Nerd: Chapter one.

posted by cute20k

Dizzy:

As I weaved through the crowded hallways, I focussed on the rhythm of my footsteps. I was lost. It was as if I was a new student atau something. Now that Annabella was gone, the hallways made me dizzy with fear. When you're with your best friend, nothing matters. When anda know you'll never see her again, not even a faint light of happiness appears at the end of the freight tunnel.
I'm still me, I reminded myself. But who was I? Before knew it, a bib of tears flooded down my chest. I hear red-headed Abigail whisper to Elisa. Faint words saying, 'They're actually crying?' I wished those...

Darkened Bliss: 3rd and 4th page - Chapter One

posted by Heya

atau was someone threatening me? Signs of threats weren’t the ones I had.
Maybe just warnings.
    “Glorious, Have anda ever, had signs before? anda know, like something warning anda not to go on atau go some place?” I asked myself. I shivered in the coldness of my room. I liked it cold.
    “I don’t understand you,” a voice rang to my left. There, in the middle of my doorway, stood Looi, my older brother. He was leaning on the door frame.
    “Hey, do anda mind? I’m getting ready. Don’t anda have your own bathroom?” I asked...

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A poem; Humanly Mistakes

posted by InnocentNoMore

Feel like falling,
    but sure to stand fast.
Feel like letting go,
    but afraid of the rash,
Feel like giving up,
    but afraid to sleep,
Want to jump,
    but afraid to of falling off way to deep.
Sometimes life takes me in weird directions,
    but knowing me, its all imperfections.
Sometimes emotions awan every single thought,
    and knowing my actions, I’m here to rot.
Forever will my mistakes continue to haunt me,
    standing here, I now see.
What if things could be different seterusnya time?
    Would it then, take a lifetime?

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Ripped Chapter One

posted by amethyst44

The one thing that never freaked me out before was when the teacher got mad at us, especially Mr. Donnahue. But watching him shred up each and every paper that he touched on that dumb meja of his...well...it made me shiver a bit.
That's when I saw it; my paper, neatly written in my cursive writting, only with merah jambu gel pen instead of the standard pencil. Under my desk, I crossed my fingers, hoping, waiting, praying. I shut my eyes.
Then I heard it; riiiiiip.
I opened my eyes, blinking as I followed Mr. Donnahue's hands, which held my torn paper, throw the scraps over the edge and into the trash...

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A Passage from my Manga; Naoko: Hero of the Seas

posted by xxXsk8trXxx

(Before anda read this, remember that this character is a student at a sailing school, and can fly.)

I woke up. It was cloudy. The green sea went into ginormus waves the size of sharks. I went outside.
My bot was shaking in the weather, and it was all wet. I sailed it anyways. I grabbed the steer, raised the anchor, and went out.
The sea was hard on me. The waves pulled my white, small, wooden bot up and down the great seas. I felt great. I felt brave. I felt calm.
Rain started to fall down as the clouds got darker. It was amazing. The wind blew...

Lisa and Minrough chapter 4

posted by Flana_2

We walked down back to what I thought was his house. It was actually his tiny hospital hut.
“You healed me”?
“Yeah. On your head. anda were banged up pretty hard.” He berkata that with pride and a smile. At least there was that. He could heal people that make them Cinta him, it fills him with so much joy. I sat down on the tiny katil and tried to think about my past, if I could remember the ocean ride here. I thought hard but it didn’t come back to me. Hmmm I wondered why, why can’t I remember a single thing about sleeping atau riding atau anything? Minrough read my...

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Still of the night ch.21

posted by TeamRosalieHale

21: Every Famous Last Word

IT continued to follow the trail of the carriage-leaving Canada, coming back to the states, through Montana, North Dakota, Minnesota. IT sensed the trail went different from north but IT was not entirely sure which way.
Master watched and occasionally offered praise to IT, always reminding IT to get the blonde, alive, bringing her to master. Along the way, IT killed a stray vampire here atau there, master smiling the whole time at the mess.
Oblivious to the danger that was closing in fast, the carriage marched on to Ohio, darkness had settled in, Tristan was sound...

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Still of the night ch.20

posted by TeamRosalieHale

20: Cinta Remains the Same

It was early morning the seterusnya day; Tristan had woken shortly before the sun, though he appeared quite different from the golden-haired blue eyed god Rosalie had seen: his hair was dark brown, his eyes a hazel color with a tad of green. “Today, I’m going to visit two of the ones I changed oh about seven, eight years ago. Then, we will head home, east through Indiana, Ohio, West Virginia, then south to home. Sound good?”
“I feel the need to hunt” David said, bookless for the first time.
Tristan nodded. “Very well. You’ll probably be back before we are.”...

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Still of the night ch.10

posted by TeamRosalieHale

10: Hero

sejak then, the two had stopped fighting, though Alice was still fuming, not that Rosalie could really blame her. Once again, Alice was unsure what came next: half of her wanted to just run and run until she had left it all behind and the other wanted to stay though this was mostly to see what Rosalie meant sejak Jack meaning so much to her.
Tristan, Jack, Michael and David waited inside the carriage. Tristan was in no hurry and Jack would have jumped off and followed Rosalie in a second. That Ciuman had sealed the deal and answered the soalan that had plagued him so many years: had she...

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Still of the night ch.5

posted by TeamRosalieHale

5: Remember Me This Way

After the initial shock had worn off, Rosalie and Alice had spent most of afternoon outside, neither finding it in them to function. Alice had gone inside the house-Rosalie still could not bring herself to do it-and after quickly gathering some clothing and other practical items for them she had quickly returned. She had silently placed a small bag at Rosalie’s feet and sat down seterusnya to her again.
A short time later, the two looked up as Sam, Embry, and Jared came through the trees just in front of them. Sam simply looked at the girls before saying “so, everything...

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story of a vampire girl chapter 5.

posted by Fangirl99

"this cant be!" Vanessa screamed.it was so loud,the walls began to shake.

"Vanessa,"her mom said."Come down! anda need to learn to use anda powers,and to control them.

"bu,bu,bu------This is all a dream!yeah,in a second,ill wake up,and not be a vampire."

She blinked 3 times,but she was still there.Not in bed.

"but,but,but,but,vampires aren't real!"

"thats what i thought,too.But,its true,its all true.You are a vampire,Vanessa,and anda cannot tell anybody,ok?"her mom berkata with wide eyes.

"ok,"vanessa said."i understand. but really,she didt.

the seterusnya day,Vanessa didnt want to go to school.This was becuase...

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dunanxizzy

posted by Fangirl99

Izzy POV

It was about 12:01. I was going out to howl at the moon. When i walked outside, i saw a note. Iread it aloud.
Meet me in the woods at midnight.
love,
Your secret admirer
me:Wow,i have a secret admirer. maybe its owen. No wait, cody! no no, JUSTIN!!! atau trent. What about Geoff?
I wondered all the way there. then, i tripped on a leg.
me:AHHH!
duncan: hei there babe.
izzy: what? oh, hi duncan. now, whos the secre admirer?
duncan: your looking at him.
me*laughs*okay, okay. anda got me. now, who is it?
duncan:me.
me:oh, really?duncan: uhu!
3rd person
izzy: oh, okay then are anda sure?
duncan; yes babe.
izzy: okay then
duncan: so,
izzy: anda wanna make out.
duncan:okay
*2 hours later*
*2 lebih hours alter*
izzy: okay well that was fun
duncan: yeah, uh, so, see anda later.
izzy:okay
duncan: yeah.cool. okay then, bye!
izzy: bye.
*15 min later*
both: I Cinta U! *start making out*

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PLEASE READ, SCHOOL EXAM PRACTISE

posted by Free_Spirit

me: sorry the name is kinda weird. Okay well i wrote this for english class, and my teacher didn't have enough room to write a proper komen just that it was very busy. so um yeah tell me what anda think. Please i honestly don't mind the harsh truth. Okay here we go.
ps.Its about ancient greece, and sorry if the names are to weird

I sighed and leaned back against the wall, my hands were trembling, making it that much harder to read my book. Usually puisi calmed me down, but today was an exception. The sun was glinting through the clouds. Today was the hari the Mykene men came to take me to Lukae...my...

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"Sometimes Goodbye is a saat Chance"[Ch. 9]

posted by HarryPLover

"I could see the sorrow in his perfect blue eyes,something was wrong."

Leonardo.....Leonardo....Leonardo.I just couldn't help but melt like an ice cream cone a on a Texas summer day, as I berkata his name over and over.He was just perfect.But I still had my worries about Lulu.Leo still hasn't explained the hug to me.But I don't want to be pushy with Leo.I wasn't exactly with Leo(yet) but we were Berlakon like it.I didn't want to ask him,I wanted him to ask me.But I could tell he didn't want to break the ice.He knew I liked him but he still so nervous(it was so cute to me).I just wished he would ask already,what was holding him back from me?I certainly wasn't,so what...