Penulisan Article: Suicide Squad trailer review

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posted by MovieReveiw

This is an opinion so if anda don't like these logoff...now.
In my opinion the new Suicide Squad sucks. Harley Quinn is not even Harley Quinn any more, Deadshot has stupid movie lines, and no King Shark. WTF. I will explain this all for people who are not familier with The Suicide Squad.
Since the beginning of time Harley Quinn has had an accent and, guess what, no accent in the new Suicide Squad. And since when does Harley Quinn dress like a fucking slut.
Deadshot is normaly the main charecter in The Suicide Squad but now he has two stupid keldai lines, "So we are some kind of Suicide Squad?" Yes anda are stupid it is the tajuk of your movie. "Let's go save the world." Fuck it I am done with Deadshot fully.
King yu, ikan jerung is, well, a giant yu, ikan jerung but now they have replaced him with a less cool Killer Crok.

Sucky one

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Psychoanalysis: Chapter 2

posted by Insight357

    I stepped outside the asylum doors onto the sidewalk. A blonde-haired, blue-eyed woman stood looking at me. She stood about 5’7”, and was my age. She walked over to me, and took my hands.
    “I’ve already talked to Dr. Laveney. Your seterusnya appointment has been set-up, and anda have three refills on your meds,” Grey said. She had always been on bahagian, atas of things, literally. “Come on,” she pulled on my hand, toward the lot.
    I’d gotten used to her yanking me, and jerking me in every direction. Now, I let her, there was...

Rhinestones: Chapter 4

posted by StarWarsFan7

I start changing into my purple tank bahagian, atas and blue denim jeans as soon as I get home. Thinking about Dustin and how he ended up in the hospital is...tough. The police berkata he crashed into a telephone pole when he hung up off the phone. I feel like everything is my fault! Hopefully he gets better soon. "Mrow?" My cat named Puma meows. "I'll be back." I start. I grab my magenta dompet, beg tangan off the wooden dresser. "I have some work to do."

When I say 'work' I mean it. I shut the door behind me leading outside to the driveway. My mom quickly opens the door and pops her head out like a groundhog about to...

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A Dream

posted by ambers1999

CH1 A Dream
I wake up on a shiny sliver meja, jadual that I can bearly see my reflection in. Two men are beside me smiling down, I get up off the meja, jadual one of the men try to grab my arm but I shake him off."Give off me" I berkata shaking. I started to run but as I turn the corner I drop on my butt and put my hand over my mouth. With my boyfriend right in fornt of me."Get in there anda stupid mutt" one of the fat guys snared."Jason I'm scared whats happening"? Suddenly I pop my eyes open and almost fall out the bed, but I catch myself."It's just a dream Sandy, just a dream" I told my self in sigh of reilf....

Thoughts of ashes pt.2

posted by Supergirl14

The club
We got to “Club monstruo” Their was the bouncer who really smiled when I showed up he let me in and looked at my Friends with discontent, “They are with me, Mitchell!”He smiled again, “any friend of Angela is a friend of mine,”He replied in his gruff voice.
Smoke and strobe lights, half-dressed girls and boys dancing filled the room, “where is Juli,"I yelled, a girl almost half my size(I am 6'5)black hair /w pale merah jambu streaks in a messy bun came in, the bulimic look did not fit her, she looked like a skank and did not look good as one. “ready to get it good?” I asked."only...

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The Texts part 3

posted by wolfkirby

The seterusnya hari was a horror show.The school was burned down to the ground.All we had left was some desks,chairs,and books.The princepal and the church owner berkata we can us the church.Its to scared us to death because Sally Gunsman was burned with the school.Her brother Brandon Gunsman
was lucky he didnt go to the school with her to get her books,but he was sorry he did every go
because him could hav go her out.We all told him its not your fault ,she went in at the wrong time.
We had to save us and the town but how?

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The Chronicles of Time - prologue

posted by nomblahnom

March 21, 1756, 8:47 PM, Appalachian Mountains.

Branches, bushes and trees flew sejak on the amazingly stable video display. The man’s labored breath was exceptionally clear. anda could almost hear his hati, tengah-tengah pounding out of his chest. Occasionally, an upside-down glimpse of his face came into view, he appeared to be quite young, perhaps 30, but had a look in his eyes, the eyes of an old man. A wise old man. The video oddly seemed to be recording from a camera mounted on a chain around the neck. His dirty complexion and half-inch beard growth gave hint that he had dwelled in these woods for days....

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Reliving Alexis.

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

A big thanks to Silverain on her idea for a title!!

Chapter 2-The Pain.

She took a shaky step through the rippling shield, smiling when she was on the other side. The boy smiled too, but still looked wary. Alexis took anothr step, larger this time, but a surge of pain forced her to the ground. She screamed out grabbing her wrist where the pain pulsed the highest. The pain burned through her whole body causing deep shudders to run through her. The boy crouched over her, and closed his eyes.
"Don't worry, it will pass." He berkata standing once lebih and moving to lean against the dinding he had before,...

Burning Moon

posted by gamer495

Upon a pricket of silver and iron, cold and brittle, a carved candle is put for display; atau so the twisted wick believes.
Warm on the inside, selamat, peti deposit keselamatan from the echoes that make the brittle iron shiver moans around its placement, the twisted wick lies in wait for its moment.
It believes that because of its simple Rekaan of its outer coating, a green sapphire and a veil of black inner linings within its carvings, shaped like the scribbles of terrible children, it has such a confidence, such a simple charisma that cannot be matched.
The wick, suffocated sejak its very beauty-marks, shivers as the heat...

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Cinta kills Chapter 29

posted by hannah_vampire

I felt cold fingers against my cheek, a tingle of seduction warmth on my neck; I woke to Beautiful Damon standing sejak the window in the vast morning sunlight. He stood there looking at me and I felt enchanted.

He had Black jeans on and he looked like one of those Model out of a posh magazine, He walked over to me “ I hope anda don’t mind my sister thought you’d sleep best in that dress” I looked down to find myself in a silk like ungu, lilac short dress that flowed .I followed Damon’s graze to a strange boy that looked at me. His hair fell to his ears it was a white-grey color and His eyes...

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Two arms of wood

posted by Elizabeth90luv

I, Stella Bonasera, criminologist from New York’s crime lab have to inform anda that due to a severe medical problem I won’t be able to present on today’s court and testify against Antonio Vasquez, the primary suspect for Anne Blaire’s murder. Responsible for my absence is Mr. Vasquez, who shot me with a machine gun right outside the back entrance of the crime lab. The video of the security cameras can pasti it.

As a matter of fact, I want to present through this letter all the evidence that I have collected with the help of my experienced team. I swear to the bible that I will tell...

My Unamed Story pt. 3

posted by boomboombunni

"Andrew? Andrew? Are anda okay?" Andrew hear Elizabeth's gentle, velvety voice as his consicness returned to him. "Hey honey, you've been asleep for awhile now." She seemed very concerned, considering she had only known him for a few hours. After the room stopped spinning, Andrew sat up and looked around. He was still in the hotel, but, he didn't recognize the room. When his gaze fell on Elizabeth, the room started spinning again. "So, when anda said, "When I was alive." did anda mean that you're a ghost?" Elizabeth's face was grim and solemn. "Yes. I'm a ghost." Suddenly, Andrew smelled cinnamon, honey, and something he didn't recognize. "Andrew I have to go. I'll be back tonight. sejak the way, call me Liz." She flashed him a dazzling smile, and she was gone. "Wow."

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When anda find you, come back to me. [PT. 3]

posted by jesus_bale

"Matthew tells me you're improving. Guess that brings us a step closer to being happy again, right?" Charlie stared at me with a hopeful expression, awaiting the answer he wanted to hear all along. Yes, Charlie. I'm finally moving on from the past because I Cinta you. I Cinta anda and I want to make this work. I'm changing who I am for you. Dr. Thomas' words, his advice, echoed in my head as I slowly paced back and forth, playing with my fingers nervously. "Jamie, what is it?" "Do anda think there's any point in staying married if the relationship isn't going to survive?" I blurted out the words...

Blaine's view -

posted by Vampiyaa

"So, where are we going?" Aiko grinned. Blaine beamed at her.
"I was thinking someplace special," he said, trying to sound casual. Aiko thought and then replied, "Do anda have somewhere in mind?"
"Take a look." Blaine pointed to the entrace of the new amusement park. Aiko gasped.
"No way!" she laughed. "You actually got tickets?" Blaine shrugged and said, "It wasn't hard. When I berkata I was the agent of Dusk Rivers, they had to let me in."
"How much were they?" Aiko asked curiously. Blaine hesitated.
"Not much," he berkata hastily.
"Blaine, tell me."
"No."
"Yes." Aiko stared hard at Blaine...

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Pain chapter 2

posted by ilovehouse345

I make mistakes
I mess up
but it was nevr enough
I no longer cry for you
no lebih pain
that means I will no longer stand it
anda took my hati, tengah-tengah and ran it strait into the planet
now I'm taking control of this relationship
command it
that means I no longer die for
no longer cry for anda
no lebih pain
but anda always win
as th blood trickles down my arm
I wisper anda name into the dark
Cierra
the pain I went through for you
no longer
is anyone out there
feels like I'm talking o myslelf
feels like I'm going insane
feels crazy
guess I keep talking to myself
why in the world do I feel so alone
nobody but me
I'm on my own
is there anyone out there
that feels just what I feel
guess it's just me.
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just to let anda know.I'm no sewisidle atau crazy.just a kid who's been through alot and has grown up faster

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My story sejak Me. (No tajuk yet)

posted by shadirby

This is all I have now, but I will add on lebih later. Just tell me what anda think. I do enjoy ideas but please no mean comments.
Here:

She was sitting there. Tired, alone, and horrified. There was nothing to be scared of, people were around her, and there was nothing to be scared of. Why did she feel this way?
Stephanie Williams had always been a little bit off normal, but today she was going too far. She was screaming at the bahagian, atas of her lungs, at school. Any person who couldn’t see what she saw would think she was absolutely crazy. But, there are still seven other people...

just a little thing i wrote for class...reviews, anyone?

posted by ryans_love

Pride is a belief in myself (or someone else) that within me is something no one else has just like me. Pride can be a wonderful thing. My coaches are proud of me when I execute a alih perfectly. I am proud of my efforts when I get the right answer to a test question. However, pride can have a negative connotation. If I am prideful of my Singing talent atau of my sports accomplishments, then I am not feeling the right kind of pride. Yes, I can be pleased with my abilities; but when I let it go to my head, then I am full of pride, just like Odysseus often was. sejak believing that I am the only person with that talent, I inflate my ego. I believe myself to be “the best of the best,” and this can damage my relationships with others. They would not want my company if the only things I spoke of were my own accomplishments.

My secret part 2

posted by lovepop

Meghan ran to the bus stop, where she saw Pompika. Thankfully Pompika looked at her politely and berkata “You know I saw Reg but ya know, how she’s jus’ across the street, she seems a lil’ mad!” Meghan thought for a saat and thought ‘why lose Pompika?’ and said, “Geez I don’t know?” Now she wished she had told the truth, instead of lying. “Oh I wish ya did.” Pompika said. “Tsk-Tsk, bad grammar Pompi” berkata Meghan. “Sorry, fine I wish anda did. There ya… anda go” “Hhhmmm, nice save.” Meghan said. “Hey look, Reg’s a comin’” berkata Pompika. “Great that’s good… wait REG!!!” berkata Meghan. “What?” berkata Pompika. "nothing."

Ellie's life in Califonia 2

posted by Charlieminster

The morning lectures went quickly and very soon it was five minit until she had to meet Zach at Starbucks. She walked with Jenii until she reached the turn she had to take “Hey Jen, Jake I’ve got to go” she berkata
“Ells where are anda going?” Jenii asked and Jake looked confused as well
“I’m, um, going to meet Zach for coffee” she answered watching their expressions. Jenii’s face lifted in to a wide grin and so did Jake.
“Okay Ellie, see anda at 2 at my place” berkata Jenii
“Okay see anda then” Ellie berkata and rushed off to meet Zach.
Ellie made it...

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Soulmates

posted by lucius_malloy

Somewhere, far away from here, there is a parallel universe. Somewhat literally parallel. There, anda may not live in civilization unless anda have a parallel – sejak the age of fifteen.
Some people, however, are lucky: twins. They have been born with their parallel.
A parallel, in this case, is a person who shares your hopes, your dreams, your deepest fears – someone, in fact, whom we call a soulmate.
On the first hari of every year, a check is made. In every city, town and village, the people who have had the misfortune to turn fifteen during the past tahun must turn up and display their parallel...

Prom Night(Chapter Three:Best ending ever!)

posted by moolah

Kat.

Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter three: Best ending ever!!
Luke was lying in a hospital katil the whole time Ashlynn gave birth. He missed the birth of his little premature little girl. He was upset and also dreaming about what his baby girl looked like. Ashlynn was aloud to come see Luke. She started crying when she saw him. She was sad that he was in a temporary coma. She thought he was cute in a weird way. She went to lie down. On her way back she fainted. She fainted because she thought she saw Luke trying to hug her in the hall. The nurse screamed, “HELP,...