Penulisan Article: black moon chap 11

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posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 11
I pulled away and showed matt where I was looking it was a brown serigala, wolf staring at us I bet he was stairing the whole time we were there the serigala, wolf had intelligent eyes like human then it disappeared and jake came out of the same spot with his bare chest
-jake?
-Bella what are anda doing here? Didn’t anda say anda were living?
He berkata coldly
-you talk like this is your land! I was born here anda cant say were I should go!
-I can Bella I don’t want to kill you!
I laughed kill me! Pfffff
-you cant kill us!
Matt berkata angry
-jake what do anda want anda don’t have powers…………and how did anda know about the Cullen's and …us?
Then something flashed in my head jake telling me storys of the Cullen's and their enemys that is his family werwolves that serigala, wolf we saw was jake! Ohhhhhhhhhhh I'm so slow
-you were the serigala, wolf werent you?
I whispered
-yup
he berkata sadly
-jake what did you…………….
He cut me off
-Bella we had a truce with the Cullen's that they could stay here but out of our lands
-were not in your land!
-I know but if anda hurt humans and drink theire blood its our job to kill anda I'm sorry!
-jake are anda blind we have emas eyes not red!
What an idiot little DOG!
-oh
That's all jake said
-we wont hurt anyone ok? So know could anda give us some privacy??
-sure but what about e………..
-jake go tell sam and your other serigala, wolf Friends WE COME IN PEACE! OK?
-K!
Then he disappeared in the bushes and there was a cuppel of serigala, wolf sounds but I didn’t care matt was looking at me confused so I told him everything then the sun came out and his skin sparkeled it was so beautiful I touched his skin and hunted for his lips eagerly he did the same when are lips met again I Lost control, and kissed him with everything I had in me and he kissed me back the same and it just SUITED me well! We kissed each other for lebih than an jam when I noticed it was getting late I really didn’t want to go but charlie was coming back from work and needed something to eat!
I pulled away not wanting to ,he froze
-I really don’t want to end this but charlie is going to be back and he will need something to eat
I whispered in his ear and kissed it I moved from his ear to his neck and then to his lips he kissed me back and then he grabbed me in his armes and ran to the car we drove utama and went inside
-go change!
I told matt
-what should I wear!
-While anda were busy with charlie I puted some clothes in your closet 20 atau maybe30
-thanks Bella!
He berkata and then hugged me and kissed me once and went upstairs
I started cooking for charlie, chicken and green beans when I was done I heard Charlie's cruiser, penjajap getting close I hurried upstairs and changed into something comfortable and rushed downstairs and found matt watching t.vi went back to the dapur when charlie came in
-Bella!
I hated when he berkata that! who else could it be!
-yeah its me!
-Mmmmmmmmm something smells good!
-yeah I cooked chicken for you!
-Thanks bells
He hugged me
-wheres matt?
-he's watching TV
-oh!
Matt came and berkata hi then charlie aet his Makanan me and matt told charlie we aet outside then we went upstairs to fake a sleep for charlie!

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posted by joe-edwardfan

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