Penulisan Article: Vialo: chapter one

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posted by khfan12

Chapter One
A discovery
Two years later
"Come on, anda three, hurry up! We have to get this project done fast!" berkata Lori. "Lori! Slow down! We aren't as fast as you!" berkata Jesse. Lori Lopez, Jesse Martin, Nina Boyce, and ray Martinez are four best freinds who are all 14, and have superpowers. "Finally! We're here!" berkata Nina. For their summer project, they were going to explore the old factory on the bahagian, atas of Higgins hill. Once they were inside, they found a room labled 'freeze room' they looked inside the window. "There are people in here!" berkata Ray. Lori pushed the 'defrost' button. They could see that it was getting warmer. Vialo, Jasper, Ella, and Steve came to life. They walked out, Vialo and Jasper holding hands. "Who are you? What tahun is this?" asked Vialo. "My name is Lori Lopez, this is Jesse Martin, this is Nina Boyce, and last is ray Martinez. this is the tahun 2007. School just got out." berkata Lori. "Oh man,... guys, we've been Frozen for two years! It looks like we've grown during that time, also!" berkata Vialo, noticing the change in height. "Oh! My name is Vialo Wilson, This is my boyfreind Jasper Talley, This is Ella Newbie, and this is Steve Hawks. Thank anda for defrosting us." berkata Vialo. They turned to leave."W-Wait where are anda going?" asked Nina. "Home." berkata Jasper. "Can we follow you?"asked Jesse. "Sure, but be quick, we go fast." berkata Ella.
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At Jasper's house, their parents and families were lebih than glad to see them. They explained what happend and introductions were made. Lori and the others were rewarded. Vialo was talking to Lori in private. "So where is your family?" asked Lori. "They all died in a api, kebakaran when I was 12 years old. ever since, I've been staying with Jasper's family ever since. Our families were close. Jasper's family gladly took me in. Me and Jasper started going out when we were 13." berkata Vialo. "Wow. I'm so sorry. I wish there was sometihng I could do." berkata Lori. "Yeah, if only anda could." berkata Vialo. All of a sudden, there was a scream. "What was that?" asked Lori. "Don't know. Let's go check it out." Vialo said. When they got to the others, every thing seemed normal. Jasper was holding a paper, his face hard as stone. "Vialo, a brick wrapped in a paper came through the door when we opened it to go outside. Look who it's from." he said. Vialo took the paper, her hands trembling. In bold letters, it said: Jack and Jess. She read the letter aloud. It says: Dear Vialo, we knew anda losers got unfrozen. We saw the news. We will take someone dear to anda losers, and the rest... is a surprise. Losers. Jess and Jack. "What do anda think they mean sejak 'someone dear?" asked Ella. "I don't know, but I don't think I want to find out." Steve said. "Well, we should at least try to find Jack and Jess. Lets go to the secret place and get ready." berkata Vialo.
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The seterusnya day, Vialo, Ella, Jasper, and Steve went to the most unexpected place for Jack and Jess to hide: The construction site. "Well, we're here. Lets check it out." berkata Jasper. They perpecahan, berpecah up into two teams. Vialo and Jasper, and Ella and Steve. When they were inside, Vialo spotted something glimmering in the darkness. She walked over to it. Then suddenly, a door came down right behind her, and she felt the area move. "What's happening? Jasper help me!" Yelled Vialo. She heard cables moving, then heavy footsteps above her. "Jasper! Get me out of here!" yelled Vialo. Jasper opened a door above her, and pulled her out. She grabbed the object. "What did anda find?" Vialo handed him the object. "A locket? T-That looks like..... Jack and Jess?!" berkata a surprised Jasper. Ella and Steve somehow found them. "Well, we didn't find anything." berkata Steve. All of a sudden, Vialo screamed. "VIALO!" excliamed Jasper. Vialo was being dragged away. "H-H-HELP ME! SOMEBODY HELP!" Vialo yelled. A giant machine appeared controlled sejak [of course] Jack. His robot held up a screaming Vialo. "Let her go, Jack." berkata Jasper, going into his super mode. Vialo, Ella and Steve also went into their super mode. Vialo was able to break the robot's hand that held her up. All of a sudden, Jess burst through the wall. "Jack!" she exclaimed. Jess stomped over to him. "I thought anda berkata we would do the plan together! What's wrong with you?" asked Jess as she yelled at him. "I changed my mind! Got a problem with that?" Jack shot back at her. As they fought, Vialo and the others snuck away. "Ah, young love." whisperd Steve. Ella giggled. Later, they were at the secret place. The secret place is their base of operations, anda know, where anda talk and see what's happening. In this case, what will happen.
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When Vialo opened her eyes, she saw that she wasn't in her room. "Where am I?" she wondered aloud. What will happen now? Vialo asked herself. "Oh, it's you, Mari, anda scared me." a voice said. "Heh. Well anda have to be sneaky if anda are a ninja as high ranked as me. Any word about Vialo yet?" asked Mari. "No. We know she's still alive, we can sence it. She is my sister, after all. " berkata the voice. "Okay. Good luck, Taylor." berkata Mari. Taylor? My sister? She's alive? Vialo thought. All of a sudden, Vialo was pulled back to reality. "Vialo? Did anda have another vision?" asked Jasper, shaking her awake. "Yeah, I-I'm okay. Jasper, my family is alive." Vialo said. "That's great news, Vialo!" berkata Ella. "Yeah, but where are they?" asked a voice. The four turned around. They saw a girl with black hair and blue highlites. She had on black clothes, fingerless gloves and combat boots on. She had a black choker with a amulet on. "My name is Serina Salas. I have come to help protect Vialo from the shadows." berkata the girl. All of a sudden, there was an explosion. "Gosh Nate, what did anda do?" asked Serina. A boy, covered in smoke walked in the room. Vialo blew the smoke off him."Thanks. Hey, you're Vialo!" He turned to Serina. "Did anda tell her about the shadows yet?" berkata Nate. "I was about to when anda made that explosion!" Serina yelled at Nate. "Anyway, the shadows are monsters controled sejak an unknown evil. They steal hearts then trap them, then a shadow is created. Our job is to find Vialo and help her destoy the shadow master." berkata Serina.

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Different Worlds - Chapter 1

posted by Bella_Swan3

Taylor had never shadow-walked with no destination in mind. Shadow walking was something she was slightly afraid to do. It made her feel unbalanced, as if she had been telah diberi too much control. Like standing on the edge of a cliff, the wind pushing anda to jump, and some part of anda secretly wanting to succumb to it's persuasive power.

She opened her eyes to the flat, glassy expanse of water in front of her. The tiny sliver of the moon was distorted sejak the waves.

Granted, shadow walking allowed her to appear wherever she wanted, but to her, it also served as a constant reminder that she was not...

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Rollercoasters - A Bumpy, Crazy Ride of a Poem

posted by Dearheart

slowly climbing

inch sejak inch

bringing me closer

to my doom

Rama-rama of

anticipation

flutter nervously

in my stomach

knuckles whiten

jaws clench

what have I

gotten myself into

the suspense

is killing me

I'm going to hate it

I'm going to Cinta it

I might lose my lunch

but I don't care

heaven help me

here it comes...

...

I hold my breath...

...

and then
I scream
my stomach
drops
my breath
is stolen
my heart
is pounding
adrenaline
courses
through
my veins
amid screams
of sweet terror
I fling up
my hands
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Gods: Chapter 7: api, kebakaran and Ice

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

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posted by CheeryDavis

Hi, so this is my first story put on here! It's in poem style so i thought what the hay i'll post it! so here it is:

the sky turns black and gray
all the color withers away
but in your arms i will stay
come what may

the lights could dim
the sky could fall
the world could stand still
but your arms are all i can feel
and in them i will stay
come what may

the waves come crashing
pulling me into the deep
but your arms are all i can feel washing over me
and as anda pull me up and hold me close
i know that anda will never let go
in your arms i will stay come what may

the sky shines bright for the first time is...

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My True Love- "For Coach Joy"

posted by iluvtheshow

I remember the hari I fell in love.
Not just simple love.
No, this was head over heels, I'd die for anda love.
I remember where I fell in love.
A small middle school in a small town.
A place anda could easily miss.
I remember the my matchmaker.
A short women, but with lebih api, kebakaran then anda could ever imagine.
lebih passion for what she does then I had ever seen.
I remember my girlfriends who were with me.
My athletic, sassy, fun-loving chicks.
My flirting consultants.
I remember him.
Good God, he was beautiful.
Yes, I remember the hari I fell in love.
True Love.
Head over heels love.
With..................
Basketball.

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This is dedicated to my first real bola keranjang coach. She taught me not just how to play basketball, but how to be part of a team. I have so much respect for her and I know I should thank her everyday for helping me fall in love. For Coach Joy.

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Sorrows BTW THIS IS 6 YRS OLD,

posted by CullensFinest13

anda hurt me I hope anda die I cant belive I trusted anda I cant belive I loved anda I cant belive I stayed up and worried that anda wouldnt call. I cant belive that i loved anda i trusted anda and cared for you. im tired of anda its time i let anda go but your always there anda wont leave me alone...its time for anda to leave so never come back walk out of my life i am going to lock my door and never let anda back in stay out so i can be happy anda need anda need to die let me live my own life anda shouldnt be controlling me anymore im not property im a human and i dont belong to the likes of you, anda were...

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Step-by-step guide: Mary Sue's

posted by vampiress015

I presuming we all joined this spot 'cos we Cinta to write, right? If so then anda all know what I'm talking about when I say that we all Cinta our main characters and sometimes want to make them the best people in the world.

B-O-R-I-N-G

Yes, we want to make our main character gets the best out of the story, since it's their story. But if they're the best people in the world it doesn't really make them believable and then the reader just doesn't care about them (which is hard to understand cos we as the writer Cinta em, but unfortunantley it's true)

So here is my step-by-step guide to make sure that...

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Dreaming of Nightmares

posted by Sweet_Pants

Just a poem. I hope it isn't much of a bother to rate.

I dream of all things

Uncertain of dark deeds and pasts

Within these thoughts as dark as sea

When once those wings of black

Hung over all

Shadowing but of the wretched white

That blinds me of all beauty.

I dream of all things

From happiness to highs

Let down these pills

atau I’m gone, retreat inside my mind

Where none but the darkest thoughts

Swallowing twilight

I dream of all things

From the stories told sejak hidden scars

Unable to tunjuk themselves

Under this intense scrutiny

That makes up this world’s attire

To the times that I could be happy

Without a drug to create

The much-needed illusion...

I dream of all things
No matter of their contents
Because, well,
Nightmares are still dreams.

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iTunes Shuffle

posted by mrs-mindfreak

I decided to do a story where I put my iPod on shuffle and start writing. Lucky for me, all the songs were basically sad atau angry music. So this is what I came up with :)

The rain pattered on the windows drowsily, drowning out Alana’s choking sobs. She sat in her kegemaran wooden rocker, and buried her face in her hands miserably. Her black hair clung to her sweaty face. Her clammy palms were wet from tears. She never wanted to alih from that spot again. Although she was filled with irrevocable remorse, she felt comfortable there. No one in the house, rain falling softly outside, and just...

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anda Shouldn't Have Shot The Dog - Short Story

posted by chel1395

‘You shouldn't have shot the dog.’ That single thought reverberated inside my head, knocking from side to side, smashing at the sides of my skull until I had to put my hands to my temples in a futile attempt to stop the pain. The man sitting seterusnya to me took a swig of his whiskey, the glass bottle knocking against his yellowed and rotten teeth. His other hand held onto the steering wheel, maneuvering the car down the winding and deserted stretch of highway. I leaned my head against the cool glass of the passenger side window, willing my head to stop pounding. From the radio, the soft strains...

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A Writer’s Mini-Game Plan: Seven Rules for a Successful Career

posted by daragirard

The Writer Behind the Words

Luck has little to do with link. A long lasting Penulisan career doesn’t just happen. A writer can burst onto the scene and quickly disappear. Another can have a series of hits then write a bunch of flops and never be heard from again. The difference between a long lasting career and one that burns out is strategy. Here are seven rules to help anda find the right strategy for anda and get anda started on your journey to long lasting success.

Learn the power of focus. For most of us, we have lebih than enough to do on a daily basis. And when it comes to any Penulisan project the senarai can grow exponentially-...

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Slumber Of The Woodland (Part 3)

posted by zanhar1

The fragrance of scotch pine and blue merapikan, spruce is pungent in the air, amplified sejak the heat of late June. atau so anda think it is June. This place feels oddly void of time. anda open your eyes to see a sun hazed over sejak stratus clouds. From all angles anda spy familiar wooden structures.
You are back.

You sit up with your legs tucked under your bottom and bask in the estival air and all of the scents that waft within it. anda furrow your brows, thinking that it is not as clean as before. Even so, the place hums with earthy energy. A stronger gust of wind picks up the hem of your baju and flutters...

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Slumber Of The Woodland (Part 2)

posted by zanhar1

anda wake up under a shady willow with a vague semblance of what anda had dreamt.
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Mask

posted by Epismatic

The Man With No Eyes Collection (3): Mask

When the curtain rises, all is forgiven.

I’ll brush it all off with a movie-star smile,

A genuine laugh, but my eyes must be hidden,

The truth they contain is considered too vile.

My voice is a song that will play through your ears,

And invite anda to dance to the sound of my tune,

I take a bow, deeply, and drink in your cheers,

I’ll always remain here,

You’ll come see me soon.

A new hari is dawning,

“Quick, put on your mask!”

And hurry outside, meet the crowd.

“Where’ve anda been?”

With fanciful jawapan to all that anda ask,

I’ll always wait here for...

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January 31 hari Challenge

posted by WritingBookWorm

So, one of my New’s Years Resolutions this tahun it to write more. So, I decided to make this:

The goal is to write something every day.

Starting on the 31st of January, every hari there is a vague word, idea, object, question, statement atau anything. anda can take it anyway anda want.

Then each hari anda should write what it tells anda too atau something inspired sejak it. Whether it be a poem, a small scene, a character description, journal entry, short story atau even just one really well crafted sentence.

Even if the prompt confuses you, atau anda have no ideas just write something! It’s a great exercise...

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Ideas on Rewriting/Parodying Famous Stories

posted by glelsey

This guide was inspired sejak a soalan recently telah diposkan sejak link on this spot. The user was looking for ways to put a twist on fairytales. I began to write an answer, but my answer soon developed into an article. So here it is.

Note that these aren't specifically for fairytales; they can be used on any old, well-known stories. After listing some ideas on how anda can put a twist on such stories, I'll give a few examples of Filem that have done used one atau lebih of these ideas.

1. Swap the genders of the traditional characters.
Do any of the characters behave especially "typical" for their gender?...

Diana's wrath chapter 1

posted by floraisbest1

Ms. Farogonda asked for the winx to come down to her office. when the winx reached ms. farogonda's office she told them that diana wants to speak wth one of you. she didnt tell me who but she told me to pick two extras. ms. farogonda can i go, bloom asked her. flora will be going along with musa and aisha ms farogonda told them. hmph bloom pouted, can we at least go with them bloom berkata quikly. fine all of anda girls can go and im bringing the specialist. ok stella berkata in a sing song voice. lets go berkata the winx. they met the RF boys outside and went in the owl. winx: WINX BELIEVIX
AT THE amazon
flora: let's get going
aisha: see ya winx
bloom: meet back here in an jam k
ok bloom musa said
( diana appears in front of them)
GUARDS take them away
what??!
(to be continued)

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Short horror story

posted by LunaNotLoony

Anna flicked the T.V from channel to channel, bored: there was nothing worth watching. Sighing, she left the news on and flopped back on the sofa, not really intending to listen.
'The war in Iraq-.'
'Oh no, anda don't,' Anna muttered, grabbing the remote. Her Dad had joined the army after her Mum had died of an overdose. Anna didn't really blame him, she'd have got out of the house as fast as possible too if she was an adult. The whole house was contaminated with the memories of Mum, of her laugh, of her accident... suicide... whatever it was. Even so, Anna missed Dad like it was painful. She'd...

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Talking to the Moon (Fanfic)

posted by Ichigo127

An Amuto one-shot
hope anda enjoy!
‘You know, Amu…,’ he was sitting there again, on the ledge of the window, staring wistfully outside. ‘All of them think you’re gone. But I know better. anda are alive, I know it. Somewhere out there, you’re thinking about me too, aren’t you?’
He was talking again, talking to the moon. ‘You’ll never admit it but anda have already fallen for me,’ he smirked at the moon. No, not the moon. It was Amu’s blushing face that he saw and it was her voice that he heard, ‘Shut up!’ he didn’t know it was the echo of his memories because he thought...

The Guardian of Zamari chapter 1

posted by ITF

A shadowy figure silently brushed the silken curtains aside as she slipped through the open window and stepped into the dark chamber. Passing a small meja, jadual and a bed, the fox quickly headed towards a cabinet that stood against the far wall.
Beaded necklaces hung above a oval mirror that was set in the center. Her eyes rested on a miniature strongbox half hidden behind the mirror.
Paying no heed to the deafening clatter coming from the oblivious guest downstairs, she skillfully picked the tiny lock and raised the lid. It was hard to tell what was what in the darkness, so she emptied it into...