the world that within anda live
where thousands of generations came to begin
this is what you've done with your life
rulers and dictators only to strife
look around at this mess anda made
the world as we know it soon will fade
peace slipping in this filfthy decade
we have created a monster that is now unstoppable
and monster thy name is man.
Please leave a komen telling me what anda think :)
This isn't my best work though
P.S i had to put all the extra spaces in cause it wouldn't let me post it cause it was to short
where thousands of generations came to begin
this is what you've done with your life
rulers and dictators only to strife
look around at this mess anda made
the world as we know it soon will fade
peace slipping in this filfthy decade
we have created a monster that is now unstoppable
and monster thy name is man.
Please leave a komen telling me what anda think :)
This isn't my best work though
P.S i had to put all the extra spaces in cause it wouldn't let me post it cause it was to short
This is a peom I wrote for a competition at my school. Tell me what anda think of it, please?
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Have anda felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until anda burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! anda will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.
Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.
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Have anda felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until anda burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! anda will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.
Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.