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posted by animefangirlz
    Hi, my name is 0-7-8-5-4-2-1-A. Also known as Bo - Bo.(pronounced bow -bow)I am a menyeberang, cross between artificial and organic life.Some of anda may call that cyborg.I was once a real full dog,until i got ran over sejak an 18 - wheeler.Most of my parts were UN damaged.They preserved me for about 200 years.They attached all kinds of wires,tubes,and other things to me.
    When I awoke I was in a cage.It was dark,cold,loud.There were Haiwan that had giant metal plates like me.Some looked completely robotic.I looked at my paws.When they touched the rock-hard steel bottom of the cage it went CLANK!!! I was scared.What was I? Then a man in a white kot and glasses picked me up out of the cage.I saw my reflection in his lenses.My cold, wet nose was a cold piece of metal. Most of me was covered in metal. My only bulu was probably fake and it was on my head.He carried me in his arms out into the light.It hurt.I saw others who looked like him.They kept putting me in different rooms and on different surfaces.They put me on a long piece of strange black fabric.It moved. It went faster and faster.I couldn't breathe.I fell.Hit the dinding and floor.They stood all around me.they poked,pulled, hurt-ed me.
    Then a strange woman came.Her hair was the color of a night at the beach.A dark blue filled with small,yet beautiful little stars.her skin was the color of the sand at that same beach.Dark yet light.Smooth yet course.She had many cuts and bruises on her face and arms,yet she had a smile on that same torn up face.She held me in her arms and stroked my head. It has been a while since I had been stroked my a person.I saw her reach into a small leather bag and pulled out some green paper.I heard her and one of the men in white talk to each other.It sounded like a bunch of mumbles to me.She shook her head at the man and left with me in her arms.
    She put me on a strange wagon.I tried to walk around as it alih along the streets.i couldn't.i fell and a blanket full of holes and patches fell on me.she turned her head at me and berkata something.i think it was"made...by...Nana....bo-bo..."I then fell asleep.I suddenly awoke to the sound of strange animal cries.I saw some smaller,fatter clones of the woman.they held their hands out to me.I stretched my neck out to them to get a better look at their faces.we ran over a small rock that made me fall of the wagon.The clones came around me.They were like the men in white if not worse.the woman came and they left.i don't know why but I'm glad she came.she put that blanket on my body and berkata to me in a voice i could under stand"You like this don't you,the blanket?Then i shall call anda bo-bo. After this blanket's creator,my grandmother who i called bo-bo."She walked away.a few steps ahead she tilted her head and berkata "Come." I ran up close to her but the blanket slipped. I cried out a small whine and she waited for me. I ran back to get it and caught up to her. She even let me sit in the wagon again.a short while later we stopped in front of a small hut surrounded sejak fields and tall grass.
    A tall muscular man with much hair on his face stared at me coldly. He picked up his head. Turned it away from the woman,who he was standing so close to him.he then yelled out some thing it sounded like Meka. (pronounced Me-Ka.)Then a tall,thin frail girl came out of the small hut.she looked lebih like the woman then the mini clones.her face was expressionless,he neck was like a giraffe, long and slider.she didn't have as much fat as the woman but i thought she was just as beautiful.she looked at me and gasped a bit.she turned her head to the man and woman and berkata quietly"Mother.father.he looks like me. and is that Nana bo-bo's blanket o him?"the woman giggled bit then answered the girl "yes.he seemed to take a liken' to it so I.." then the man rudely interrupted her "so anda thought anda could just give it to him." the woman's face tuned red and she yelled at the man "well she was MY grandmother" it went on and on. they kept yelling and screaming at each other.i was scared. then the girl came a gently wrapped me in the blanket like a new born child and took me in the hut.she put me in a small room. she berkata to me in a kind voice" hei Bo-Bo I'm Meka,Meka Nizum." i liked meka from the start.i looked around the room.there was a blanket on the floor.she called it a bed.there was a small wooden bucket in a corner.then with a paw a sidled a door to a smaller room there was many different clothes and shoes in it.i liked this one. it was long,silky and soft.meka berkata "you like my skirt?i do too.it's one of my favorites."
    It was almost Cinta at first sight.then meka left to the main part of the house i tried to fallow but i tripped and fell.meka turned to me flat on my face.i could hear her giggle.i got up with whatever bit of pride i had left and went to the main room.i got there and saw a man.he was a bit shorter and skinner than the one meka calls father.this new one didn't as much hair on his face and arms.he look nicer than the other one but i didn't think he was any kinder to meka.i walked over to him and yelped at him.he looked down and i tried to act cute.i guess it worked because he squatted down in front of me,patted my head saying"hey little guy whats you're name?"i barked."oh that's right anda cant talk yet.here"he dug in his pant pocket and pulled out a small red collar.the tag on the front was made of gold.i couldn't quite read it.the boy hold up a small mirror.and read to me what it said."Name:Bo-Bo.Owner:Meka Nizum.etc...Do anda like it little guy?" i wanted to tell him yes and say thank anda for such a gift but when i opened my mouth to bark."thank anda for the kolar its really nice."did i jut talk? i looked around the room.meka looked at the boy in shook turned to him then the look turned to rage.

"Eric,what did anda do?!"
"there's a micro chip in the color.now instead of barks and yeps he says actual words."
"and that's BETTER for him?!"
"well he IS a robotic cyber canine!"

OK.now I'm confused cyber...robotic....canine.OK guys, anda don't really want to hear a bunch of teenagers fighting do you?If anda do you're probably Membaca the wrong book then.If anda don't want to hear this,then let's skip past all this shall we.OK then.so after the kids were done yelling at each other,Meka got very weak.she clenched her chest in pain and fell to her knees.her family huddled around her.she was able to stand but almost fell.she leaned on her mother and was taken to her room.while Meka lied there on her katil THAT boy came to her katil side.

"oh Meka,I'm so sorry.fighting over a silly little collar.it's not like us.i"m sorry for putting anda in such pain.I should have known you're body couldn't take it."
"wait.Eric.I'm sorry and.I.forgive you.if.you can forgive me.
"why would i not be able to?you're my Cinta and my world."
"i come from a poor family.and anda are the son of a very wealthy man so."
"MONEY HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH IT MEKA!i Cinta anda because you're speacel to me.and i wont let anything happen to you."
"what about me being half machine.can anda ever Cinta a woman who is made of iron,titanium,silver and a thousand others."
"yes"
"how?"
"because i Cinta you.i don't care if you're poor atau if you're full of metal and wires.i still Cinta you.and anda shall be,one day,my robotic princess."

awww now isn't that sweet.wait.HE'S RICH.That tooth pick has money?!

BOOOOOOM!!!!!!

what was that?i must go see.i ran outside to find a very large and shinny.worm.yep anda heard it here folks.a large metallic worm.I ran to it with all my might.jumped up to it's head and bit it.my claws diged past its metal plates.i ripped its head off. and the body fell.it still wiggled around like crazy.i heard the boy scream from back at the house"BO-BO.ROLL INTO A BALL.AND ROLL TO IT.FOLLOW YOUR INSTINCTS"I didn't know what else to do.so i did.i knelled in and tucked my legs in then out of nowhere i yelled"RAZER BALL"I rooled at such high speeds.i could fell it.my body went right through it.i got out on the other side.looked backed and ran back to Meka.she held me in her arms.

"Eric, how did anda know he could do that?"
"simple. i put those parts on him.i know every trick and stunt he can do.though that's only half of it.he can learn different stuff to.all anda have to do is train him.here's the"owner's manual" anda may need it.go over it with him it'll help the both of you.well i gotta go see anda two later."

after he left i followed Meka back inside.i whelped at her.she looked back and we started training.she read out what was in the small book.

"OK lesson one.look on robo pet's back.there anda will find the"caller?"put it on and anda will be able to unlock it's power"
'OK boy hold still' .she looked all over her fingers went up and down my body.it tickled.she then pushed a small bottom and a little box came out.she opened it and there was a small glove.she put it on her metal hand and it clipped on.then when ever she moved her hand my body moved the same way.i got dizzy just from her shaking her hand around trying to get it off.later she figured out how it worked.i was like her puppet.it was fun.but i was still curious about Meka and Eric.so when i was able to touch the ground earth again,i walked over to Meka.

"um.Meka.how did anda and Eric meet?"
"hm mm it's been awhile.well one hari when i was a few years younger when I was about 15.I was working in the fields sejak the house with my parents when Eric and his family drove by.our eyes met and Eric jumped out the back of the can and came running sejak us.he asked me why over 1/2 my body was covered in metal plates.i told him i was born a very sick child.our parents came over fast.his father started yelling.our dads yelled at each other.we talked and talked.months later when we celebrated being together for 2 years we "fell in love"it was the fist time for both of us.and since then our bond has been strong"
"so anda to have been together for 4 years?"
"yep.soon to be 5. Eric berkata when both 22 were going to get marred so on my seterusnya birth hari Eric's going to propose."

wow. 5 years and there getting married.they must really Cinta each other.i wonder.is there someone like that.for me.i went out side for awhile,to clear my head some weird-o drove sejak with a giant lazer on the back of his truck and zapped me with it.i Lost my ability to talk and things got bigger.i ran back inside but i hit my head on the dogie door.which never happened before. i looked down and my paws were so small i looked in a puddle sejak the house and i had big brown eyes and a small fat head.wait big eyes,fat head, little paws.....I'M A anjing, anak anjing AGAIN!!!
as i started whine,Meka comes out.she looks down and sees my rolling on my back in the dirt on the porch.

"awww come here wittel puppy"
' wittle?puppy?!"
she caries me inside to her room.closes the door.and yells at me
"WHAT HAPPENED BO-BO?!.YOU'RE A PUPPY!!."
since i cant talk i dragged out a note book and pen.i wrote down what i wanted to tell her.
'all i know is that some man in a large truck drove sejak and zapped me with a lazer.i don't know what to do.hey can anda see if Eric can help?maybe he knows something atau somebody who does.'
"I'll see wait here OK boy."she walked out of the room got a phone and called Eric.
a few minit later she comes back with Eric.He asked me what the truck and lazer looked like.i told him all i know.Eric walked around the room a couple times.he berkata he may have to do test on me to find out whats wrong.

TIME SKIP.

its been a bulan since Eric took me in.I've been placed in a small room.not like the cage i was in 3 years ago.it was like a big glass box.the tile was cold but not like the cage.the ceiling was full of bright lights.i was getting bored and utama sick.then Eric and some men in white coats came in the men had needles,scissors,and other stuff.they huddled around me while Eric stand in front of me talking to me.he berkata the found something called an anti-dote.they did there thing and in a few days i was sent back only to that Meka was in pain.a pack of stray Anjing and Serigala cam in the hut and destroyed the place the Man and Woman were OK.but they tore some of Meka's electronic limbs of.she was missing an arm and the other was hanging sejak a few cords.half her face was scratched.she Lost an eye(her fake one)she was barely there.she tried to talk to me.
"b-bo-bo.y-you're alright.c-can anda talk?"
"yes.i can.are anda OK?"
"d-do i look OK to you?"she giggled.
i looked up to Eric.he squat down in front of meka.put his hands on what was left of her face.with tears in his eyes he said
"meka.i shouldn't have left anda alone."
"no.it's.OK.these things happen."
Eric couldn't bare to look at her in that state.i looked at his face he was in tears,i never saw Eric cry.that's probably why he kept his head down.meka was tearing too.Eric looked at her sad broken face.
"Meka.I'm going to cure you.i can preform a surgery but unfortunately most of the parts i need don't exist anymore. if they do there rare."i asked Eric what kinda parts he needed.he showed me a small list.i ran to a big folder that had my name on it.i opened it and it a senarai of my parts and blue prints.i took the folder to Eric he looked in side and i could tell we had the same idea.her told Meka that he was going to take my parts and use them to repair her.but that meant killing me.we both accepted our fate.we were both drug-ed so we wouldn't feel a thing.Eric gave me a slow painless death.i

It's been a tahun since the operation.Meka is as good as new they even gave her some upgrades.her and Eric finally got engaged.they later had a great weading and some little clones.cause of Eric's family fortune .they were able to send there parents to a heaven like seiners home.everyone is doing all right.me.I'm on bahagian, atas of awan nine with my old best friend.the little girl who rescued me from the pound.took me utama gave me a name and utama and cried for me when i was ran to bits.now I'm resting on her lap while she sits in her rocking chair.she died of old aged.i died to save a friend.we both lived our lives to the fullest.i was telah diberi a saat chance at life.and i saved the ones i cared for.now we both look down at our Friends from above watching them grow old like we did.getting there saat chances at life and crying for the ones the love.time changes when anda sleep.its been over 200 years since i saw the wold in my old life things change in 200 years.and they'll keep changing for all the years to come.

now you've heard my story.i hoped anda enjoyed it.its a sad story yes,but it ws a good stoy wasn't it?
The Hero's Journey Is Not A Formula - Christopher Vogler via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by missceleb86
Why do we complain about the unfairness of life?
We have been stroked sejak its handle, not felt its sharp knife.
Our hearts moan because we do not have the latest iPhone.
But have we stopped to see the cries of those without a home?
They come to our doors desperate for help.
But all we do is dismiss them with a rude yelp.
"Be not harsh to the orphan and the needy" says our Lord.
But some of us do not heed this and whip them with a steel rod.
Though the whole world we cannot feed.
We should not refrain from doing a good deed.
And prevent from drowning in a pool of greed
posted by I_love_Mikey
Are the nights getting too long?
Are the lights getting turned off?
Are the curtains being shut?
And are anda the one shit out of luck?

Is it anda being pushed around?
Is it anda begging to be found?
Is it his cologne that waters your eyes?
atau is it the fact that anda remember all of the lies?

Was it anda tied down onto his bed?
Was it anda screaming at the site of his head?
Was it anda who was crying all of those nights?
And the was it the fact that no one noticed, that helped anda remain alright?

Do anda regret ever meeting him,
atau was it a lesson well-learned?
Do anda regret ever helping him?
For your skin is now burned.
Do anda regret ever Ciuman him?
'Cause it your body penetrated,
and used for abuse.
Yet you've pretended not to care;
anda just tie up a noose.
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posted by Cries_Bloodlova
Chapter 1
The Alien
Holding this girl in my arms never felt so…wrong. The things I had to do so I could go back home.
Home
The word never sounded any sweeter. I miss every it every day. It sucks to be stuck hear on this miserable plant in this miserable place. I no longer want to be here. But I must if I want to see the one I Cinta the most my precious darling Piea. He must be missing me ever so much. I miss him to. I let go of Eliza and look her in her bright blue eyes. I brush her bronze color hair. And Ciuman her soft plush lips. She was everything I guy could want. Her hair, her lips, her eyes,...
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posted by jannah_heaven
Ros are red
violets are blue
when i flush the toilet
i remember you. . .


anda who speak of beautiful words
when at my back anda have this sharp swords
delighted sejak how anda praise me
set me on api, kebakaran is what you'd like to see

what's even funnier is that i've done nothing to you
i'm just being me and there's nothing anda can do :P


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a short poem for the haters ;)
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posted by Insight357
“Get out of my house!” my mother shrieked at me from the other side of the kitchen.
    I watched her with wide, blue eyes as she pointed at me with the tip of her butcher’s knife. My cheeks flamed red with embarrassment, shame, and a tinge of anger. “Mom, I-”
    “Mrs. Shortts, you’re overreacting about this. Landon has no control over who he is attracted to,” Bane, my best friend Skylar’s father, said.
    “Butt out,” I hissed glancing over at him.
    Bane gave me an icy glare, but berkata nothing....
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posted by xXxEmoRAwRxXx
My soul burned deep in agony, as the tears and blood dripped down hitting the floor, I grabbed the pisau one last time. I looked at Chris, begging for mercy, I lift up the pisau and stabbed him one last time. "What, have I done?" I asked to myself. "I'm a murderer, how am I going to explain this, to Jamie? Chris touched me in a inappropriate manner, so I gutted him to death?" I berkata to myself. There was a soft knock at the door. I had a mini hati, tengah-tengah attack. "Just a moment," I responded to the knock. Struggling, I pulled Chris under my katil and got the swifter and mopped and washed my hands. There...
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posted by yamiXyugi
The sky was growing dark when it all happened. I was strolling through the park, the same as any day. I was alone, all alone. i looked up to find not one awan in the sky.
'Night already?' I thought. I looked at my watch. 3:00 pm it read. "That's odd," I said. I decided to go utama then.
As I made my way home, things got weirder. There were no cars on the jalan and no lights on in any of the apartment buildings.
I turned down an allyway, my usual way home, when I felt an unatural tugging sensation in my gut. I didn't know why, but i was suddenly walking in the complete opposite direction of my house.
It felt like my body was under someone else's control. I started jogging, then running.
"Stop it!" I yelled. I tried to force my legs to stop moving, but as soon as I tried, I felt a searing pain go from my forehead to the base of my spine. I screamed and everything went black.
posted by RuBB3rDuckie
Dear The-One-I’m-Glad-I-Never-Kept

I smile now, not like before. It seems like after anda had hurt me, I got over anda pretty quick, I guess I never really loved anda and anda were a waste of my time, and when anda left I think part of me was relieved, I wasted my time crying, I guess I was blind.

That smile there, on my face, he put it there. Remember those three months anda had put me down, made me cry, and I was still stupid enough to stay? He re-wrote that in two, he replaced my permanent frown, with a smile.

Do anda remember that hari I was crying, and I had went to anda with support? Today I still...
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posted by coolie
The Haunted Playground
    Why couldn’t I come here? Mom wouldn’t explain why. I came here everyday! It seemed like Mom was hiding something from me. I was so mad, that as I walked away, her words seemed to blur and fade out as if they were never berkata in the first place. I ignored her, that’s why I was here in the playground.
    I loved this playground. Although it seems rusty and old, it was a well working playground. A large brick fence stood in the right, blocking what was any further. It was like a scarecrow telling anda to stay back. I’ve always...
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An idea popped into my head the other hari and its been playing like a little movie in my head ever since. I really need to know if its any good, atau if the idea has already been used. Also I need Nasihat for the characters and their names. I also appreciate constructive criticism and grammar and spelling. The names are temporary. I've never written a book that is completely in the present tense so please help me catch any tense mistakes! Um, oh yeah. It doesn't have a tajuk yet so if anda have any suggestions just let me know!

(: Thanks!
-Carly

The story is jumbled a bit. It is because the characters...
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posted by Percysclique
Chapter 3 – A hati, tengah-tengah Beats Faster
    Kaolin ran up the stairs of the dungeon. The guard had been asleep, but he could awake any time. His boots pounded on the stone floor. He prayed for them to be light and soundless.
    Kaolin torn down the corridor, his was hati, tengah-tengah beating faster with every step. He knew his way around the castle. He had been here a few times before when he had visited Amorite.
    Kaolin had no idea what he was going to do. If he went utama with the jewels, the King would charge him of thievery. If he didn’t pay...
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