Liz's grandma had died last night. Liz was at her HUGE house on long island. Just then her family was called in to the house. Liz's Grandma's will had been read and her grandma had left her family the 200 acor house! Liz had always liked the house. It was big with a thach play house and 3 log cabens to play in ,a big lake and pool, a forest that went around the property, a rose garden, a walled garden and a epal, apple orcherd in back. Not to mention a few other things. Her family went utama that night knowing they would alih in to the house. Liz would not chang schools because the house was so close to the one they had now.
Liz went to school that hari and told her Friends that she was moving to her grandma's house. All of her Friends had been there once so they knew she was not going out of the school.
When Liz and her family moved into the house Liz went to look around. sejak the trash she found some sunflower seeds, boxes, some old sheets with no holes, and some bulding stuff. Just then Liz got a great idea. She called her Friends and told them to come over.
When all of Liz's Friends got there Liz told them her idea. "What a great idea!" berkata her friend Erin. "LOVE the idea Liz!" berkata her friend emily. "LLLLLOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE IT!!" berkata her friend amy. So all the girls got to work. They planted sunflower seeds in a bulatan of six and built big box bildings. after a few months the sunflowers had grown and the box bildings were all built. They tied the bulatan of sunflowers together and coverd most of it with a sheet then the part they left open they coverd with one lebih sheet to make a door. They did this again and again with many lebih sunflower circles. When they were done each of the girls took thier own tent of sunflowers then they made stage pujian for the stage in the center of all the little tents. To the north there was a mask making kedai and to the east was a dark path lined with jars with things like dirt water mud bugs and fur. This was were the witch docter would be. To the south was a shrine to the new gods and to the west was a writeing kedai were the scribs would be.
There was every kind of thing a old town had. Liz and her Friends looked at their new town and with one look they knew they would have great fun in this new place in Liz's new house.
Liz went to school that hari and told her Friends that she was moving to her grandma's house. All of her Friends had been there once so they knew she was not going out of the school.
When Liz and her family moved into the house Liz went to look around. sejak the trash she found some sunflower seeds, boxes, some old sheets with no holes, and some bulding stuff. Just then Liz got a great idea. She called her Friends and told them to come over.
When all of Liz's Friends got there Liz told them her idea. "What a great idea!" berkata her friend Erin. "LOVE the idea Liz!" berkata her friend emily. "LLLLLOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE IT!!" berkata her friend amy. So all the girls got to work. They planted sunflower seeds in a bulatan of six and built big box bildings. after a few months the sunflowers had grown and the box bildings were all built. They tied the bulatan of sunflowers together and coverd most of it with a sheet then the part they left open they coverd with one lebih sheet to make a door. They did this again and again with many lebih sunflower circles. When they were done each of the girls took thier own tent of sunflowers then they made stage pujian for the stage in the center of all the little tents. To the north there was a mask making kedai and to the east was a dark path lined with jars with things like dirt water mud bugs and fur. This was were the witch docter would be. To the south was a shrine to the new gods and to the west was a writeing kedai were the scribs would be.
There was every kind of thing a old town had. Liz and her Friends looked at their new town and with one look they knew they would have great fun in this new place in Liz's new house.
Okay, well I want to start Penulisan a Fantasi Book, and I have come up with a couple starting sentences, but I can't think which one I should start with, please give me your honest opinion on which one I should start with......
1. Mr.Johnson's math class joined together in room B3, and sat down at their desks like any other day, but it was anything but that.
2. Once upon a time, there was a school in Grand Rapids, called St. James and thats where our story begins.
3. The school hari at St. James in Grand Rapids started out like any other hari for the kids of Mr. Johnsons math class.
4. Our story begins with room B3, a classroom in St. James in Grand Rapids.
1. Mr.Johnson's math class joined together in room B3, and sat down at their desks like any other day, but it was anything but that.
2. Once upon a time, there was a school in Grand Rapids, called St. James and thats where our story begins.
3. The school hari at St. James in Grand Rapids started out like any other hari for the kids of Mr. Johnsons math class.
4. Our story begins with room B3, a classroom in St. James in Grand Rapids.
