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My story is about a girl named Karleigh. It's summer time and she is down the shore. Her mom bought a place at a campground outside of sea isle. The campground is called Driftwood. She has been going there since she was 8 1/2. Now she is 13.
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I woke up to a knock at the front door. Why is kelsey's friend here so early?! "Hello, Leigha. I'll go get kelsey." Leigha came in and sat down while I went to get kelsey. "Kels, wake up!" I said. "Go away, Karleigh." She murmered. "Leigha's here." I yelled walking away. Kelsey jerked up right and flew into the bathroom. Am I allowed to go back to...

DREAMER AND FAITH
OR THE CREATION
OF A NEW DAWN

In the beginning, the heavens and the earth were one. The sky was a mass of angry black clouds and the sea was nothing lebih than a seething, murky swamp. Life as we know it did not exist.

Then one hari the clouds began to swirl and grow, thunder crashed and a terrible rain began to fall. It rained night and hari for weeks and months, as if it had done so forever.

At last the rain stopped, and the heavens and the earth had separated. From the waters and the mud, the gods began to appear, like young shoots of rumput spinging forth from the earth.

This...

THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE

CHARPTER1:STARSTRUCK

STAR
16 YEARS LATER

I woke to a brisk summers morning in a small town just outside of New York City in my parents best friend Kachiri and her daughter Quinns apartment.Kachiri has been looking after me since i was a baby since my parents had died in a car accident when i was very younge and i had no other family,Kachiri berkata my parents wanted her to look after me anyway.

As i got out of katil to go downstairs i made my way into my bathroom brushed my hair,cleaned my teeth and examined the sapphire dragon that streached...

3. P H O N E C A 1 L

The phone rang about 9am I was the one who answered. Norah went to the store to buy groceries and my sister is upstairs still asleep. I picked up the phone, “Hello?” I spoke the word softly. “Mariah? This is your aunt Lourdes How are you?” She berkata happily. I didn’t expect her to call at this moment but I was surprised. “Hi Aunt Lourdes um, I’m fine. Why’d anda call?” is the
why’d-you-call-thing the right thing to say to someone ten times older than me?
She didn’t mind me saying that.
“I told your mom that anda are welcome to stay here for the summer....

Chapter 4
When I woke up I was in an un-familiar place I Jumped from where I was laying down and walked down a flight of stairs
To a room full of people who were pale, I saw Edward and Bella so I
Thought this must be something that Bella knows about. I walked down the
Stairs and demanded I know what was going on, this pale man with blonde
Hair who looked so young came up to me and told me that Bella had come
To save me from losing my life and that Edward brought anda here. I
Started asking questions:
"Why are anda guys so pale?"
"Well we are Vampires like you"
"But I am not as pale as you, and YOU...

I started to wake up and open my eyes to see Tilly, 'Hey sorry bout that, Tyler should have been lebih aware but he is stupid oh damm his going to kill me'. I sat there puzzled 'Umm what do anda mean' she laughed and sat down beside me 'WE can hear each others thoughts except yours only your soul mate can do that but hei it seems like anda have to of them'.

She walked out and I rubbed my eye's and looked at my phone it berkata One new message, I opened it and it was from Oni: hei your dads coming out today so maybe anda should go back utama with him if anda know what I mean but anda can stay if anda want...

CHAPTER 1
10 years lalu I Lost both my parents in a car crash. I've been living on my own for about 8 years, I lived with my grandmother for a while untill I got a job and found an apartment for real cheep. I never realized what it was like to lose your parents and feel this bad. I never knew my self would be in this postion. Alone, no true family, a baby on the way. How do these girls deal with kind of stuff. They act like everything is so easy,and they have nothing to worry about. Maybe becasue they have moms and grandmothers to help them out. I have no body. My grandmother kicked me out after...

Its pretty Long thxs for the komen-komen :)

I woke up to the sound of my phone ringing, I looked at the screen and I saw melissa.baker :) and no this was not Damons sister it was the melissa I got drunk with.

'Hey mel whats up?' I hearded her laugh, 'Finally were have anda been it's like anda had dropped off the face of earth'. I laughed and started to walk to the mirror, 'Melissa anda have no idea and It's good to hear anda other then the same people all the time and if your gonna ask if I can come out no I cant visting my dad and I have shit to work out, so i better go Cinta ya mwaa', She laughed...

Angie hears her mom and stepdad fights. She sits there and cries..and hope it's over. Then she hears a loud gun pow!! She hurrys to the living room and see's her mom laying on the floor..with blood all over. She cries over her mom's bloody body...her mom looked at her and whisperd "help". She called the police and after she hung up. Her stepdad beat her..then rapped her. Then the police busted in. Her mom fighting for breath. Angie to weak to get up yelled "Help, please help" They came to resuce her, too. After her and her mom recoverd. The mom found a new guy. He only beated the daughter...everytime...

I ran against the wind which came contrary to me.
I ran against the wind which approached me till I adhered to the parapet panting. Hardly anybody was lebih in the park although it was rather warmly and still not at all so dark. The sun just set and the water under me turned orange-red now. I needed a while, before I came to the quiet, then I did not menanggung, bear it any lebih and the tears forced her way. I knew that she lied. I knew that this not corresponded to the truth what she had berkata to me. I did not have any proof for it but I could feel that there was something wrong. I did not want any more....

*Note; This is a variation of RachelGal97’s Endless Pain. Same names; just a different plot. Please komen and tell me if anda like and what’s your kegemaran part*

Endless Pain: Chapter Three

“Are anda sure it was David?” Mom asked as she comforted Selena on the couch.

“I’m positive.” Selena replied. “I’d know that face from anywhere. And… if I was never his girlfriend, he never would have gone to that jewelry store, and he never would have died!”

Mom didn’t reply. She knew her daughter was feeling guilty, and nothing could help it. Instead she said, “But, sweetie, he loved...

2. B I G D A Y

One, two, three, go! I breathed. My right leg went first up the stairs and then my left leg.
This is it, this is really it. I squealed nervously. “Marhion Angeles Pearson, daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pearson” the school directress announced. I went up the stage. The audience clapped.
I felt like a bintang on a rise.
I saw Riley on the crowd, my eyes glued to him. Ah! I tripped. The audience gasp some stood up to see if I’m okay some of them laughed and snickered. drake Cell, the school news anchor video taped my clumsiness, he smiled. I quickly stood up. My cheeks were red, I...

Dizzy:

As I weaved through the crowded hallways, I focussed on the rhythm of my footsteps. I was lost. It was as if I was a new student atau something. Now that Annabella was gone, the hallways made me dizzy with fear. When you're with your best friend, nothing matters. When anda know you'll never see her again, not even a faint light of happiness appears at the end of the freight tunnel.
I'm still me, I reminded myself. But who was I? Before knew it, a bib of tears flooded down my chest. I hear red-headed Abigail whisper to Elisa. Faint words saying, 'They're actually crying?' I wished those...

“What?!” I half cried. I grabbed his baju and gasped from the air in my throat wanting to get out.
    “Get ready, we are going to be late. anda okay?” he asked calmly. You, go, away, my inner self told me.
    “I’m fine. Bye. I’ll be down in a minute.” I said, softly releasing my tight grip on Looi’s white t-shirt. After about 20 minit of getting knots out of my hair, getting my kot to button, and getting my tote bag ready for school, Looi yelled, “Let’s go!” and I heard him shuffle down the stairs.
    As...

If I took three showers, and washed with 15 shampoos, my hair would still be Tangled after an hour. Looi, my brother, always berkata my hair looked like I dyed it, when I didn’t. I looked down, my shoes were already on with the black shoe laces. I felt like I needed to barf. At least that’s what it felt like. Greeting hopped on the counter and stared at me. The brown cat bulu was splotched with black dots and white lines. She is a different cat, that’s why I like her. I looked back at the mirror. Well, anda look terrible today, I thought.
    “Greeting, anda can’t look...

This is something I'm working on.. It's the first long piece I've attempted. People often told me I'm too good at imagery and huraian to write anything short. Perhaps I use too much imagery? I'm curious about what anda guys think.

I already know it's a bit shakey at some parts. I still need to do some revising. I revise every time I finish Membaca a book. I feel each book teaches me lebih and lebih about writing.


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Welcome to Birchmoss
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(This was just a part of my planning and organization. It is subject to change)

Violet kept her skeletons right where they belonged. Hidden away...

thxs for the komen-komen plz keep commenting thxs so much :)

I had not been to school which I kinda liked but I had to get out I hated it here and when i know that he likes me it makes it lebih hard just to even look at sefo it kills me.

I stayed away from him for aleast a week, I had to talk to him but alone and the only time i could talk to him was now, He was standing near the water and it was sunset how perfect is this!
He turned and saw we walk down towards him 'Hey Belle look before anda say anything your wrong i know that' I stayed at him excuse me did he just say I was wrong 'Look here sefo...

Thanks to all those who read the last chapter, oh, and please be apart of the War of Hearts Rp!!! It's really fun to do!:D




~2. New and Mysterious

Suddenly, a great light shone before me in the dark. And the Key responded to it, so - as if on instinct - I lifted the magic Key and pointed it right at the light. I heard a sound, like a door opening, and suddenly I was engulfed in the pleasant warmth of light.

Very slowly, I opened my eyes and blinked a few times until my vision cleared. I immediately saw tall town-like buildings, a white stoned ground (the ground I was sitting on), and clear, open...

I wish that my mother was here that stupid drunk driver had never been born it was my fault that she died that she is now six feet under the ground . I remember that night like it was yesterday I had snuck out with my Friends to go to this party down town . Things got out control I called my mom from the side of the road for my mother to come get me one of the guys from the party zoomed down the road and hit my mother head on . I saw it I was right out side the car I saw the red hot metal cut into my mother flesh ending her life with one feel-swoop like the cut of a blade. The ones who should...

(this is realistic-fiction, some parts are true and some are false. that should become evident as time goes on ^.^)

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Everything fell when David left.

I never understood why. He was just a friend to me at that time, and Friends back then were any people that I could get in a conversation with. They were people that listened. And really, seeing him leave was just as normal as any of my other Friends that left during that year. There was nothing too it; I would convince myself over and over again that he would eventually come back, and that we might even meet up in the future and talk about our...