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The Sisters: Chapter 5: Frankly My Dear I Don't Give A Damn.

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Murder is always a mistake - one should never do anything one cannot talk about at dinner.

Tayce’s p.o.v

The three of us sat there watching the chick flick. I was in grossed in the storyline, Belinda was doing her homework and every time someone berkata the word love, Ruby nearly chucked. It had been three days since we had seen the protectors. Belinda sighed and put the book she was Membaca down. “Want to order pizza?” She asked, Ruby shrugged and I shook my head. “Why can’t we order pizza?” Belinda asked, I didn’t really want to tell the why but if anda have sisters anda understand....

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A CURSED STORY CHAP:6

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 6: headache.
I was Membaca a book on my katil when I heard my phone buzz
-hi Alice!
-hey Bella I was wondering if me and edward could come and see u?
What? People just don’t call and invite theme selves over! ugh! just be nice Bella she's a good vamp atau I think she is……
-yeah sure when are u coming?
I asked. I was positive she even had a set time to come here….
-at 3:00 pm it gives u 1 jam to clean and dress up! I'm so happy to come over! Yay!
Then she hung up oooh I don’t want to dress up! Right now I just want to sleep atau continuing Membaca my book! I just climbed of my katil and cleaned...

Destiny's child ( chp 1)

posted by JuneLynn

Waking up to the sound of my parent’s shouting I got up to change. Looking out the window, I saw the world was bright and colorful. Many would think it the best time of the hari but to me it was the gloomiest time of all. It was the same thing every morning my parents would wake me due to their constant arguments, going to school, and returning back home. Life I felt was just plain boring.

This morning, was no exception because my parents were picking at each other again. I crept into the dapur to get some breakfast. What I saw was horrifying; the dapur was a total mess. Nothing was in...

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Jacob and Renesmee's Life -- Chapter 10

posted by BiteMeCullen107

“Jacob!” I was yelling from the bath room. I was in lebih pain than I ever thought was possible. It felt like something was clawing its way out of my stomach. This couldn’t be possible I’d been pregnant for only a couple of months. “JACOB BLACK GET anda keldai UP HERE!” I was screaming so loud I thought Jacob would go def. He ran into the bath room and kneeled down beside me. “What’s wrong?” “I need to get to grandpa.” He picked me up and drove me to the house and carried me in.

“What’s wrong with her?” My mother came rushing to my side. “Mom stop just get grandpa.”...

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a cursed story chapter 3:school

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 3: school
I was running in the deep green forest when Damien caught me sejak my waist I tried to pull away from him trying to get help from my elements but…….nothing the elements weren’t obeying me as they used to. what the hell is wrong with me? I looked at Damien I was sure he had something to do with this he gave me a a sweet smile and said
-now anda can’t push me away HONEY
I tried to push him away then I saw a beautiful bronze haired boy with the strange golden eyes he growled and lunched himself at Damien………..

-BEEEP..BEEP..BEEP…BEEP oh I hate this alarm I think I should...

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A CURSED STORY:chapter 2

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 2: the Cullen’s
When I entered, the club my fave song was on so I went and joined the crowed and started dancing with a really cute guy he had blond hair and dark blue eyes that u could swim in them like, forever! We started talking about our past and figured out his name is tom and has two sisters. then I made one up as I did for my school and then he bought me a few dinks after an jam I found myself making out with him I really didn’t like him I just like to spend my time with someone until I break the damn curse and find the one for me, the one that will be my moon and light...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 5 Hard Yakka Part 2

posted by H-A-T-R-M

Parvulo clapped his hands together, the cage closed in on the Karkadann, and then it just vanished, Parvulo then returned to Grito’s shoulder. “You did well; anda lasted the full 10 minutes” berkata Grito. They understood that this was their first case, so really it was a test and they passed. “It is time for us to go” berkata Grito. Parvulo summoned the portal over them all, most likely that Alec was unable to walk properly. This time it was not cold, they saw each other and could talk freely. “How anda doing over there, man?” Marley Asked. Alec gave him the thumbs up (Which still meant...

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black moon chapter 18

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 18
I opened my eyes I was not were I was before I fainted I was somewhere dark I could recognize the scents I was in italy!how did I get here
-oh dear Bella anda finally are awake!we didn’t know if we will see anda vampire alive again!
He came closer looking at my shocked and confused face then alec came in
-oh Bella your awake!
He came closer and hugged me like he was my best friend atau something I didn’t want to offend him so I hugged him back
-what's going on?
I asked as I was pushing alec away
-oh Bella anda were sleeping here for 100 years!and now anda finally woke!
-i fainted for a 100...

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Fight to Freedom Chapter 2: Sterns and Banks

posted by ganondorfslayer

morgan Sterns was sipping up the last drips of her coffee. She was going to need every last drop if she was going to work late enough to finish all of her reports. She had reports on all kinds of things. Serial killers, counterfeiters, asassination attempts, the senarai went on and on.
Why do the FBI get handed everything, she wondered. But what she really wanted to know was why she was the one always stuck with work when most of the other agents and anaylists were just standing around telling jokes and drinking coffee. morgan got back to her kerusi, tempat duduk and pushed her badam, almond hair out of her eyes and...

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High Skool Rainbows:chapter 1- part two

posted by summerfrog

Skiro
As I walked in I noticed everyone knew someone. I also noticed everyone was wearing uniforms-blue atau white shirts and kaky pants. I stood out much lebih than I wanted to. Though I wanted people to see me, and now a lot did, so I smiled and looked for a place to sit. I saw a group of girls, a group of hot guys,a lot of black-wearing people,and some others that I didn't care to know.
Then there was a meja, jadual that was mostly empty except for one very cute boy. as I walked toward him I saw lebih of his features: he was pale-I wondered why-,skinny and muscular-did he play a sport?-,and light blond...

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Lasting Happiness: Joy and Pain...Even the Mundane

posted by SquirtCriminal

Lasting Happiness

She stared anxiously at the pot of water on the stove, compelling it to boil. Though the old axiom warned of its counter effect, she had long since telah diberi up on trying to look away from the pot, unable to tear her eyes away. Tapping her foot impatiently, she began to sing quietly to herself to pass the time. It was a merry song, the one she always used to entice travelers from the road to come to her window. As she sang she only wished her tune could charm heat into the water of her pot the way it Charmed most of the passerby. The thought only seemed to bring her further impatience. The impurity...

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Forbidden Cinta - Chapter 5

posted by ashesandwine

Thanks to Patrisha727 for helping me decide which POV to write...
Thanks as always to Emmett4ever for that first push in the right direction...
And thanks to everyone for Membaca my story:D

"Catherine's POV"

Even in the darkest night I'll find you. Life wanted our destiny to be a wave breaking in the sea, only that,nothing more... But I will not resign to that, I will not give up, we WILL meet again!

I woke early in the morning, my hati, tengah-tengah broken into a milion little pieces. I stood there looking at the roof, not wanting to face this new day. I heard my mother call for me:
"Catherine it's time to...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Fifteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Fifteen

Later that hari and after makan malam, majlis makan malam and playing games with Mama and Sean, Mac knew that after Sean leaves their utama to go back to his own house and once Jamie cleans them up, put them in their pajamas, and read them a story atau two, then she can ask her mother about that odd thing she saw that hari between her mom and the man who hangs out with them any chance he got.

It was coming closer and closer. After Sean had left, four of the Thomas family is heading into their ‘getting ready for bed’ routine which means taking a bath, taking sure that the kids had brushed their teeth, used...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Fourteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Fourteen

It wasn’t the makan malam, majlis makan malam that they didn’t had before. It was very different. It was a makan malam, majlis makan malam of confusion especially for the two little girls.

During the makan malam, majlis makan malam of steak, mashed potatoes, and peas, Mac and Izzie watched their Mama and Mr. Sean eat their makan malam, majlis makan malam in silent even through Mac saw Sean giving her mother some glimpses of his grins to Jamie to tell her that this was a great makan malam, majlis makan malam she served. Hoping that Mama saw those grins that Sean saw her, the only thing she saw that her mother was just eating her dinner, drinking her Iced Tea, and wiping the messes that was on Jake’s...

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The Darkest Hour: An Autobiography

posted by noodles3378

My story will start where everybody else's starts. At birth. I was born on a Memorial Day. There was only one doctor and he was too busy watching the Orlando Magic game to help my mother bring a child into the world. And so, I was a half time baby. With the Magics losing, my family waiting in the hall, and the doctor wishing he was watching the game, I was pushed harshly into this cold, bright and scary world.
First words out of my father's mouth when the doctor placed me into his hands, "Heidi's kinda ugly, isn't she?" For God's sake! I was just pulled out of a woman's stomach! The nurses...

pratonton waverly hills: one night of hell. story from the scapel number one

posted by delta117

i was a normal 18 tahun old colledge student until that night that horid night the night that all saftyein my life died it was a cold winters night and me and my friend trent were going to stay the night at the most haunted hospital in the world ( lebih like most haunted place of death and despair)waverly hlls sanitoryoum. "come on tristen were going to be laughing stocks of the city if we dont go" "trent." i berkata " i dont think we should go" " are u chicening out." he berkata " no" i snapped " but its not right" i argued to him "its these millions of death beads and u have famly that died there and so do i" " he looked mad at me mentioning his uncle who died there but i had to make him stop. "no" he berkata " we are going." to hell i thought if only i new

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Future chapter of Trapped in my own time first Ciuman version 2

posted by dragonrider

This is the other version I thought of. Honestly I like the other one better but it's good to think of two versions for a chapter. I think this version is shorter because I didn't want them to have the same dialogue.

I drag Elliot outside with such great force that he almost ran into me outside. I stop and let go with his arm
"What the hell was that all about? What is wrong with you?" I demand glaring at him
"Wrong with me? What is wrong with you?" he damands
"What do anda mean?"
"I saw anda in there drooling over serge like he was a plate of nachos,"
"Yeah so? I like him and he likes me....

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A boring play in which everyone is messed up in thier own way. : )

posted by BURITOES

Charactors:

Hayley Williams
Taylor York
Zac Farro
Jeremy Davis
Josh Farro
Lacey Mosely
Lady GaGa
Kanye West
Soulja Boy
Joe Jonas
Zac Efron
Erin
Dallas Winston(Dally)
Ponyboy Curtis
Alice Cullen
Mandy
--------------------------------------------------

Lady GaGa: Why don't we go out tonight?

Kanye: Can't konsert tonight.

Lady GaGa: Hayley?

Hayley: Ummmm depends.

Zac: Cum awn GaGa I'll go wit cha.

This is all I'm posting. I want to see if I get any responses first. : )

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Who are the real monsters: Chapter 1: The Antiworld Part 2

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

“There anda are, man” berkata Marley. Opal had blood dripping from her mouth; her eyes were shining red as the shadows off the pokok darken her whole body. “Looks like we’re all done here, let’s alih out before they wake up” berkata Alec. Later on while Marley was lying on his bed, the same thought came across his mind, should the others know about their secret. “Marley, someone’s here for you” berkata Marley’s mum. “Hey man””It’s us”. This is Lindsay and Slone Sudiro (Lindsay 14, Slone 12) Lindsay level is higher than Opals, Slone’s is no better than Nathan’s. They are...

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Underworld High: Chapter 3: From Dawn to Dust

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Max’s p.o.v

We saw James come in. He looked at us and rolled his eyes. “Fighting again” he asked, Billy smiled. I snickered. “Billy has a bit of a temper” I joked. I heard Billy snicker. “Both of anda need to shut up. We all need to talk” He said, Billy and I looked at one another. “What is it?’ Billy asked. James let out a deep sigh. “Living room, now” he ordered. We both nodded and went downstairs. Once we got there, all the hunters were there, but no slayers. “What’s going on?” Caleb asked. James took a kerusi, tempat duduk seterusnya to him, we followed. “Billy and Lilly’s family...