Penulisan Article: I Raised Myself Not To Cry**sniffle**

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posted by VampirePrinsess

Mommy... Johnny brought a gun to school,
He told his Friends that it was cool,
And when he pulled the trigger back,
It shot with a great crack.
Mommy, I was a good girl, I did what I was told,
I went to school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold!
But Mommy, when I went school that day,
I never berkata good-bye,
I'm sorry Mommy, I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry. When Johnny shot
the gun, He hit me and another,
And all because Johnny, Got the gun from his older brother.
Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I Cinta him very much,
And please tell Chris; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crush.
And tell my little sister; That she is the only one now,
And tell my dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now, And
tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best; Mommy, I'm not
the first, I'm no better than the rest.
Mommy, tell my teachers; I won't tunjuk up for class,
And never to forget this, And please don't let this pass.
Mommy, why'd it have to be me? No one deserves this,
Mommy, warn the others, Mommy I left without a kiss.
And Mommy tell the doctors; I know they really did try,
I think I even saw a doctor, Trying not to cry.
Mommy, I'm slowly dying, With a bullet in my chest,
But Mommy please remember, I'm in heaven with the rest. Mommy I ran as
fast as I could,
When I heard that crack, Mommy, listen to me if anda would,
I wanted to go to college; I wanted to try things that were new,
I guess I'm not going with Daddy, On that trip to the new zoo.
I wanted to get married, I wanted to have a kid,
I wanted to be an actress, Mommy, I wanted to live.
But Mommy I must go now, The time is getting late,
Mommy, tell my Chris, I'm sorry but I had to batal the date.
I Cinta anda Mommy, I always have, I know; anda know it's true, And Mommy all
I wanted to say is,"Mommy, I Cinta you."

***In Memory of The Columbine Students Who Were Lost***
Please if anda would,
Pass this around,
I'd be happy if anda could,
Don't smash this on the ground.
If anda pass this on,
Maybe people will cry,
Just keep this in your heart,
For the people who didn't get to say "Good-bye."
Now anda have 2 choices,
1) Repost and tunjuk people anda care
2) Ignore it and anda have just proven anda are a heartless mole

Problematic129, Nice-Guy and 29 others like this

Dearheart I kinda wish there was a third option. When I read this a while back, I admit it was sad and touching (despite the fact that the poetry wasn't the greatest, lol), but it's been passed around SO many times and become so, [i]so[/i] cliche that...well, I guess I'm a "heartless mole" now. :-/ Go ahead and bash me if you want. *never really appreciated chain-email-guilt-trips to begin with...* EDIT: Woah. Uses the word "Mommy" way too much, lol. 24 times! Sheesh! "Mommy blah blah blah mommy blah blah blah mommy mommy MOMMY blah blah blah..." Wow, I feel really mean now... *laughs nervously*

Sweet_Pants It is sad, but doesnt change my opinion on it. I always thought there was another way, as all.

VampirePrinsess Well if its ur option than its ur opinio so i cant blame u........

BrittanyAM It was beautful but sad it made me cry and no i cant pass it on cuz i'm too shy i would if i wasn't shy and no that dosen't make me a (heartless mule) cuz i wouldn't pass it on but it will all ways been in my heart and stay there (forever)!!!!!!

Cammie This has really saddened me, both the poem and the smart-arse heartless comments from some. Cliche? That's a really friggin interesting word to describe innocent people being slaughtered by wackos. Thank you for posting this.

Twilightzook I agree with BrittanyAM.

Cinders This is a chain letter. Touching as it may or may not be, it is not original work. Soapboxes are meant for original poetry and writing, not for chain letters. If you want to post this in the forums of a more appropriate spot, than I fully support that, but I don't think it belongs here if it isn't original work. I'm sorry to be blunt, but I'm getting really tired of seeing so many people posting chain letters and unoriginal work as soapboxes. MajorDork got a lickin' for doing that, and at the time I supported it, but if you only enforce a law sometimes, it's not fair to the people who suffer the consequences if others can get away with it.

SkyHedgehog that was beautiful

Heya WOW

inexplicable ... so sad...

Jakeluvr101 Whoa that wa so amazing i luvd it

twibabe2 it was woundful love it

HecateA its nice, but I think some of the beauty of the work gets taken out of it when you say things like "tell my daad I wont go to the zoo", "tell Chris I had to cancel the date" and "tell my teacher I won't be going to class today".

dramarama That was beautiful...made me cry. People today have a very odd interpretation of the word cliche. It may be a recycled theme, but feelings can never be cliche. btw people have used the word cliche so much lately that it in itself has become 'cliche'.

EmzLovesCheryl This is beautiful, it made me want to cry.

ladycountry omg it's so sad.i like it

PoweredKaoru that was sad, and since it says mommy so much it sounds like a little kid(around 5-9) is saying it, which makes it even more sad.

luna-lefright wow how sad!!!!!

krissynaytowhow wow thats thesadest thing i ever heard well not as sad as my grampas funeral

hotlia Awww

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Buy my Cinta

posted by blossomyumyum

I know I asked for too much before
I know I deserved for anda to walk out the door
But anda didn’t need to give it away
I promise anda I’ll give it a try

anda don’t have to buy my love
anda don’t need to give so much
I know I asked for a lot, never seemed satisfied
The word want makes me needy
Cause anda don’t have to buy my love

Wants have become a trigger
I’ll put your white string around my finger
Shouldn’t have asked
I never should’ve asked

anda shouldn’t be buying love,
Don’t give it all away to me
I hope anda finally see
That wanting from anda makes me feel
anda shouldn’t buy my love

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For you, angel.

posted by blossomyumyum

Dear Noel,
I wish anda were still here. At times I go back to when we were little- we loved to eat Push Pop Ice Cream and played in the pool every hari at summer. anda were my best friend….. But we were like sisters, playing house with my little brother. Your grandmother got along with my grandmother, too- they talked to each other, and life seemed to be so easy. But then we parted sejak moving away. I still thought of anda every day, and every night I worried that something would happen to you. But now, you’ve left us all, and gone on to a place only anda and your sister know about, along with...

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The New Age (prologue)

posted by graystone

I don't remember how long I've been running on the open grounds. It does seem long enough. But I was determined,devoted. Up above me,I noticed the jet planes streaking through the blue-black sky. I did not care. I did,but I'm not going to pay any lebih attention to it than the sinking feeling of hopelessness that wrapped my mind. The grounds were filled with rocks and sharp stones. Any other day,I would have bothered to watch my way trying not to fall onto the sharp stones which threatened to tear my skin,but not today. No,not today...
There were sirens screaming faraway,in my direction and...

The Protectors Ch. 1

posted by problematic124

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Chapter 1
The new girl
The first thought that came to Phire's mind of the new utama she was ment to live in for the seterusnya four years was how strange. Her new hometown looked like something from a movie atau a magazine.
If Phire hadn't known that she was in Open fields she probably would have mistaken this for L.A. atau even Hollywood.
Everywhere Phire looked there was always something there. Whether it was stores atau houses atau even forests, it all looked perfect. What was funny was that Open Fields didn't even have a single farm. Nothing personal to the place but with...

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Save me (Re-write for spelling, grammar, etc.)

posted by Pixalfirebolt

Max's POV
I ran into my room crying. My head and my hati, tengah-tengah ached. I thought it was clear I loved Fang, but I guess he didn't know. I saw him Ciuman a blonde haired tramp at school today. I fell on my katil and burried my face in a pillow. I cried.

10 minit later

I heard my door open, but I didn't dare to look. I knew who it was and I didn't want to talk to him. Fang sat down seterusnya to me and stroked my back.
"Max what's wrong?" He said, worriedly. I just shook my head.
"What's wrong?" I took my head out from under the bantal and stared daggers at him. I didn't care my mascara was running atau that...

20 things guys should know about girls (will update as I think of more)

posted by angeladdie270

1) Girls (at the age of 15 atau so) think about sex just as much as guys do... The only catch is some of us think about it for the emotional parts, and some of us like it for the physical parts. You'd be surprised who is in which group.

2)If anda like us, tell us. Do not be worried about what we'll think, because we are flattered no matter if we like anda atau not.

3) Most of the time girls are 99% sure when a guy likes us. The only way to be 100% sure is if anda tell us.

4) For some strange reason I've always found myself to become attracted to guys that like me. (Unless they're super creepy and stalk...

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Remembering Lisa

posted by dawnisbeauty

She sat there,at the foot of the bed,holding the book in her trembling hands.Rain fell,slamming against the window.The room was cold,dark,gloomy despite the bright blue of the walls.Somehow,blue didnt seem so bright anymore..not without her wide dimpled smile to liven it up.Lisa...the name filled her mind,sending little pinpricks of raw pain throughout her body.Lisa,bright thrteen tahun old Lisa,her only little sister was gone.Tears spilled from Jane's eyes.She looked out the window.Max was standing in the porch,his handsome face tight with concern.Somewhwere in her mind,she,Jane knew it was...

A Strange Meeting Part 1

posted by princess_mimi

hei guys...I'm very much nervous... This is my very first writing.. I've never write anything in my whole life except for school essays ....I will update it in 3 parts... please if u like it leave a comment... criticism is also well-comed

Darjeeling,India. Darjeeling is definitely one of the most beautiful places on the earth. Every single thing of Darjeeling is beautiful. Its berkata that Great dangerous are always lurking behind every beautiful thing, same is here. Every single thing have its own story here. Some of them will make anda happy and the others will make anda sad atau it will make you...

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Save Me Ch. 8

posted by para-scence

"Alessa! What happened?!" Micah shouted. I had a long, somewhat deep scar around my face. Last night Dad pushed me down the stairs, and the railing had scratched my face. But I just shook my head.

"Nothing. I just fell," I said. He sighed and shook his head.

"Would anda please be lebih careful? Do anda know what it'd do to me if anything happened to you?" I frowned.

"I'm sorry," I berkata quietly. He rolled his eyes and hugged me.

"C'mon. We're late for school."

***

After school, I told Micah I wanted to go to the park atau something; just to have fun. I didn't tell him I was still afraid to go home. He...

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My life Story

posted by StarWarsFan7

Author's Note: "Look, now I am going to tell anda a story of the life of Rosemary Vega a.k.a me."

I am 11 years old.
My birthday is on March 25.
I am very talented at Penulisan stories, Singing like famous people (example: Shakira, Selena Gomez, Demi Lovato and Lady Gaga) I Cinta to act!
When I grow up I want to be singer atau a voice actress.
I am interested in bintang Wars, Pokemon, Everybody Hates Chris and George Lopez.
My kegemaran pokemon are: Jirachi, Roserade, Mismagious and Meganium.
I was born in Wilson, North Carolina.

Thank anda for giving me your time to read this article! :D

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That Wasn't Your Fight[Ch.6]

posted by HarryPLover

"Overall, I can say that I do Cinta him.."<3

"Overall, I can say that I do love him.."<3

I was still in his tight embrace. I never noticed how warm he was. Well maybe because I have never really hugged him like this before. I was just happy to have him back.
"Mmmmm. I missed you." I heard him whisper in my ear.
"Mmmm...No I'm pretty sure I missed you." I manged to whisper back. It felt a little weird saying that too him. I didn't want to be all rude and not say it back, but I just.. I still haven't decided whether I actually wanna go through with this atau not.
Granted, I did say that I do Cinta him like Cinta him, Cinta him, but at the same time I Cinta him as my best friend and right...

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An Unforgetable Place-Part 3

posted by rAsberrStrarS

He took my face in his hands, so normally-as if it were a natural instinct to be doing something like this with me.
My breath caught in my throat,as we inclined our heads towards each other in perfect unison.
His lips were warm and soft and sweet,all at the same time,the sensation blinded me.That he was Ciuman me,not other better girls who'd had lebih experience.My hati, tengah-tengah was beating like a birds wings fluttering together in my chest.
Taylor pressed his forehead against mine ans sighed,his breath warmed my face.
We pulled back form each other but still twined our fingers together like we were never...

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posted by 4evercherylcole

It was a cold, breezy Autumn evening while Anna Brown, a reasonably fair girl, was watching EastEnders. She loved this programme and never missed it.

Anna, like I said, was a reasonably fair girl. Her kindness and helpfulness would sometimes flatter people. When she was a little girl, people used to 'oooh' and 'aaah' at her cuteness.

Soon Anna's Mother put her to bed. Her Mother told her to go to katil early that night for her Mother had a surprise in-store for her the seterusnya morning. It was for Anna's 9th birthday and she was extremely excited.

During...

Kat: a pet like no other 1

posted by woowie

Isabella and I were driving through the darkness of Florida. We had gotten married a tahun earlier, and decided it was time we got a pet. Finally, we came to the adress we were looking for.

At the door, there was a woman, and seterusnya to her was a large, purple, alien. "I'm Charlotte, and this is Penelope, the proud mother." berkata the woman. Penelope happily greeted us. "Where's the dad?" I asked.

"Oh, Zapnis? I honestly don't know where he ran off to this time. I suppose anda want to see the babies?" she led us into a room. One ran forward, and crashed into my legs. She was light pink. "Boys are...

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Spirit Of Stone part 5

posted by TDIlover226

Eddie just sat there in the plain dark room, looking at the many tubes coming from the floor to the ceiling. He wondered how far away he was from home, he wondered what his parents thought, and if they'd already called the police, trying to look got him. He estimated that it had been about 3 day's sence he'd been taken. Now he could tell that it was getting dark, he wasn't sure how though, the room was dark, had no windows and was cold and damp. He thought that he might starve down there, sence the mutants hadn't been down there for some time now. He really thought that they were just messing...

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Overlooked

posted by spikes_girl

There are things in your every hari life that anda never take a saat glance at. They're just there, noting to ponder over atau to think about. Here are two short tribute poems to some overlooked objects in life.

Fountain

The biru laut, ultramarine colored water
Dances down through a maze of marble obstacles
Creating clear rainbows across the sheer water's surface.

A carpet of copper and silver glints at the bottom
Coins
Lost with memory of young children
Wishing for new puppies
Ice cream cones
Hot Anjing for dinner
For bedtime stories to become flesh
A cat in a hat to come skipping off the pages.

Everything is in this...

I need anda chapter 6

posted by haileywithin

When I woke up Darla was sleeping sejak my side. I silently slipped out of the katil and into the kitchen. There was a sudden knock on the door. "who is it?" Darla berkata rubbing her eyes. Shrugging my shoulders I opened the door. Outside was 2 two police officers. "goodmorning sorry to disturb anda but we are looking for someone". "oh who?" Darla berkata coming to the door in a robe. The police officers pulled out a picture of a young teenager. Her hair was short brown and cut in layers. Like Darla's. Her eyes were brown. Like Darla's. And she looked 19. Like Darla. "have anda seen her?" I replied "what...