Penulisan Article: I Raised Myself Not To Cry**sniffle**

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posted by VampirePrinsess

Mommy... Johnny brought a gun to school,
He told his Friends that it was cool,
And when he pulled the trigger back,
It shot with a great crack.
Mommy, I was a good girl, I did what I was told,
I went to school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold!
But Mommy, when I went school that day,
I never berkata good-bye,
I'm sorry Mommy, I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry. When Johnny shot
the gun, He hit me and another,
And all because Johnny, Got the gun from his older brother.
Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I Cinta him very much,
And please tell Chris; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crush.
And tell my little sister; That she is the only one now,
And tell my dear sweet grandmother; I'll be waiting for her now, And
tell my wonderful friends; That they always were the best; Mommy, I'm not
the first, I'm no better than the rest.
Mommy, tell my teachers; I won't tunjuk up for class,
And never to forget this, And please don't let this pass.
Mommy, why'd it have to be me? No one deserves this,
Mommy, warn the others, Mommy I left without a kiss.
And Mommy tell the doctors; I know they really did try,
I think I even saw a doctor, Trying not to cry.
Mommy, I'm slowly dying, With a bullet in my chest,
But Mommy please remember, I'm in heaven with the rest. Mommy I ran as
fast as I could,
When I heard that crack, Mommy, listen to me if anda would,
I wanted to go to college; I wanted to try things that were new,
I guess I'm not going with Daddy, On that trip to the new zoo.
I wanted to get married, I wanted to have a kid,
I wanted to be an actress, Mommy, I wanted to live.
But Mommy I must go now, The time is getting late,
Mommy, tell my Chris, I'm sorry but I had to batal the date.
I Cinta anda Mommy, I always have, I know; anda know it's true, And Mommy all
I wanted to say is,"Mommy, I Cinta you."

***In Memory of The Columbine Students Who Were Lost***
Please if anda would,
Pass this around,
I'd be happy if anda could,
Don't smash this on the ground.
If anda pass this on,
Maybe people will cry,
Just keep this in your heart,
For the people who didn't get to say "Good-bye."
Now anda have 2 choices,
1) Repost and tunjuk people anda care
2) Ignore it and anda have just proven anda are a heartless mole

Problematic129, Nice-Guy and 29 others like this

Dearheart I kinda wish there was a third option. When I read this a while back, I admit it was sad and touching (despite the fact that the poetry wasn't the greatest, lol), but it's been passed around SO many times and become so, [i]so[/i] cliche that...well, I guess I'm a "heartless mole" now. :-/ Go ahead and bash me if you want. *never really appreciated chain-email-guilt-trips to begin with...* EDIT: Woah. Uses the word "Mommy" way too much, lol. 24 times! Sheesh! "Mommy blah blah blah mommy blah blah blah mommy mommy MOMMY blah blah blah..." Wow, I feel really mean now... *laughs nervously*

Sweet_Pants It is sad, but doesnt change my opinion on it. I always thought there was another way, as all.

VampirePrinsess Well if its ur option than its ur opinio so i cant blame u........

BrittanyAM It was beautful but sad it made me cry and no i cant pass it on cuz i'm too shy i would if i wasn't shy and no that dosen't make me a (heartless mule) cuz i wouldn't pass it on but it will all ways been in my heart and stay there (forever)!!!!!!

Cammie This has really saddened me, both the poem and the smart-arse heartless comments from some. Cliche? That's a really friggin interesting word to describe innocent people being slaughtered by wackos. Thank you for posting this.

Twilightzook I agree with BrittanyAM.

Cinders This is a chain letter. Touching as it may or may not be, it is not original work. Soapboxes are meant for original poetry and writing, not for chain letters. If you want to post this in the forums of a more appropriate spot, than I fully support that, but I don't think it belongs here if it isn't original work. I'm sorry to be blunt, but I'm getting really tired of seeing so many people posting chain letters and unoriginal work as soapboxes. MajorDork got a lickin' for doing that, and at the time I supported it, but if you only enforce a law sometimes, it's not fair to the people who suffer the consequences if others can get away with it.

SkyHedgehog that was beautiful

Heya WOW

inexplicable ... so sad...

Jakeluvr101 Whoa that wa so amazing i luvd it

twibabe2 it was woundful love it

HecateA its nice, but I think some of the beauty of the work gets taken out of it when you say things like "tell my daad I wont go to the zoo", "tell Chris I had to cancel the date" and "tell my teacher I won't be going to class today".

dramarama That was beautiful...made me cry. People today have a very odd interpretation of the word cliche. It may be a recycled theme, but feelings can never be cliche. btw people have used the word cliche so much lately that it in itself has become 'cliche'.

EmzLovesCheryl This is beautiful, it made me want to cry.

ladycountry omg it's so sad.i like it

PoweredKaoru that was sad, and since it says mommy so much it sounds like a little kid(around 5-9) is saying it, which makes it even more sad.

luna-lefright wow how sad!!!!!

krissynaytowhow wow thats thesadest thing i ever heard well not as sad as my grampas funeral

hotlia Awww

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Nothing lebih Ch. 17

posted by para-scence

**6 months later...***

Bride laughed and giggled as I bounced her on my leg; just another hari at the park. It was summer, finally, a break from school. I guess I was looking ke hadapan to being a sophomore. School wasn't that bad anymore now that I had my friends. Felicity wasn't that bad either. We're not exactly the greatest of friends, but we can tolerate each other now. Also, Trace and I started dating. It was great; he's really sweet and funny. I couldn't ask for a better guy.

"Come on, Harley! Gail berkata to be utama sejak three!" Aspen called. Everyone else was already at the sidewalk, starting...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 29

posted by Insight357

    I sat in a chair sejak the window. I was still in the asylum. Days had passed, and nothing changed. I hadn’t heard anyone speak of Alexander. Doctors would come in my room every few hours to make sure I was still alive, atau to make sure my arm didn‘t hurt.
    I asked one of the doctors about my arm. None of them knew how I broke it. Even the paramedics berkata it was broken when the man from the motel called. I didn’t break it. I knew I didn’t. I think the motel manager did. He probably crushed it when he found out I never gave his Nyquil back.
    Earlier...

A strangers last thoughts

posted by ginax0o

Something has severely struck my curiosity
Did he know of his ill fate?
What were his last thoughts?
Did he even have any?
If so were they about his family?
If his life flashed before his very eyes,
Did he have any regrets about what he saw?
What were his last words?
So many soalan about this stranger dying before my very eyes ,
whom I know absolutely nothing about.
The touchiest of subjects and its stuck on my mind
Truthfully, the only people who know the answer
are forever gone.
When time comes for me to know the answer
What will I be thinking about?
Will I know of what is to come of me?
Who will I...

dear diary

posted by elizasmomma

I'm setting here looking at a paused Televisyen screen and i soon think to myself is that the way that our life is life when we are put on hold.

If tht's the case then why are we not able to do the work that we have been meant to do forever,
how can the people in our lives trust us for the decisions that we make in our daily lives that we live.

are we really meant to be th people that we are meant to be atau are we just passing through this earth with no-where to go but down, that is what i think about when i see a paused tv.

so what do anda think about this journal entry that i just wrote anda need to think about what i berkata and give me your best anwsers that anda can give.

thnx erie morgan maples

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Firework Swim

posted by Triscia95

The entire neighborhood was out in the front yard of Sarah's house. They had all come back from the 4th of July fireworks at the high school and were now waiting for the huge firework tunjuk that her father put on every year.

Though Sarah wasn't out front with everyone waiting for the show. Instead her and Niall were running out to the pool. The tunjuk was a little over a half an jam long so they finally had time to themselves.

The backyard was dark, but the pool water lit up beautifully from the full moon light. Millions of stars shown in the black sky, something that doesn't happen to often...

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Cold

posted by GummyBears_11

A poem written sejak me. :]

Snow, snow, anda are perfect.
When anda fall down, anda are white. A clean white.
Beauty, beauty.
The beauty of snow.

We put on mittens, we throw on scarves.
We run outside a pick anda up, ball anda up,
and toss you.

Then we get cold.

We run inside and drink coffee and cocoa, we
snuggle up, we run hot baths.

Why, snow, why are anda so cold, so numbing?

~

A new girl at school is seen sejak the Queen bee.
She is approached.
The Queen bee wears expensive clothes and carries a designer bag.
Her hair is sleek and red, with gorgeous highlights in all the right places.

She isn't skinny, nor is she...

Life...

posted by Dhampires

Hate.Disappointment.Regret.They all make up some of the worst thing in our lives...then why can't we just give it up?Give it up and just throw all our problems away?The answer is simple because this,this is reality not a fairytale atau some fiction story,where the writer can just have their way over their characters like puppets.No.Not at all in reality does one have their way to control their life atau the lies that people tell them.There's no stopping your troubles in life atau changing the regret you've made in the past ...it's life.

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lebih Than This II Ch. 2

posted by para-scence

"Blake!" I shouted. I ran down the stairs, grabbing my kot and quickly throwing it on. He came in, holding Tristen and Blakely in his arms.

"Huh?" he asked, completely unconcerned.

"Hollis is being taken to the hospital," I berkata quickly. His eyes widened. "We need to go!" He nodded, and we got the twins in their car seats, and soon were off to the hospital.

"What happened?!" he asked, his voice thick with tension.

"I don't know! Her teacher just called, and berkata she was being taken to the hospital! I didn't really think to ask the details!" I said, panicked. We were nearly speeding, but still...

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Just One of Those Days (part 2)

posted by tvluva49

Sorry this is so long and confusing! I promise the seterusnya part will be lebih exciting! :)

I never realized how much it hurt to be shot. Who would believe that that was the least of my worries? I certainly didn’t, so as I was screaming my head off, all people from around the school came into the band hall to see who was screaming. I suppose they would be a bit disappointed that someone was just shot and no one had gone crazy, which would have been equally entertaining, but there was tension in the room. Kids stood awkwardly around, not knowing what to do. People that had crowded around me earlier...

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Penulisan Petikan

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Penulisan for the Green Light: How to Make Your Script the One Hollywood Notices sejak Scott Kirkpatrick

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Dear Alex... Again.....

posted by WildCherryWolf

To You,

Why? Why are anda so gorgeous? Why were anda wearing shorts?

I was tossing and turning in katil last night, knowing that as soon as I saw your face, I would like anda again. Dammit, I was right. I do. Sort of, anyway.

And I saw anda in class. I peeked through the window. Damn, I saw you.

My dreams did anda no justice. You're too gorgeous! Your blonde hair, anda didn't cut it, that kind of made me happy.

Your eyes, why! Why did I have to want anda so bad again?

Chloe and I, we were going to call anda vampire. But now, I'm all shy again. Too bad, conscience. I'm going to do it. Vampire! Vampire! You...

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the fight, part three, the winner.

posted by zutaradragon

such a waste, my life whole life is a fake!...but im sure ive been a thorn inside of you...that's torn at anda for years. but, sometimes i can taste how pahit i've become...& its lebih then i can bare. sometimes i pray for someone to blow me away. just make it quick, but let it burn...so i can feel the pain thats torn at me for years. i can't be held responsable, 'cause this is all so new to me. can i...leave my pain behind?

the sercomstances of one's birth are irrelavent. its what anda DO with the gift of life, that determends who anda are. the pain anda feel...its normal. let it go.

anda think?

yes. anda need to forgive and forget.

i can't...

anda can.

but i can't just do nothing...

it's not nothing!

i cant just...forget.

it's hard to forgive, and its hard to forget, but it's easy to do nothing...

you're right...

cat

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A Dream in Reality

posted by Katiegirl

Nightfall was rising rapidly on this wondrous night.
    I found myself dozing into a heavenly sleep. My dreams
    began to indulge my inner thoughts seductively I could
    Feel myself falling into an internal state of mind. A place
    where only my dreams had a recollection of my desires
    of this world. In the outermost parts of my dream I
    could faintly hear the loud thunderous storm
    lurking outside my window. Slightly beyond
    the...

cakee

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Teen Pregnancy

posted by Screamer45

Teen Pregnancy

Introduction: Why are there so many teens pregnant ? And why do they do it in the first place if they know they are going to regret it ? The answer is too much freedom and absolutly no discipline.Teenagers don't understand the fact that one hari they'll regret it , but the problem is that they say,"Oh no that will never happen to me, I have self-control "but when that self-control isn't controllable anything can happen .
First Paragraph: But teenage pregnancy is preventable.Some times during pregnancy it's very difficult to keep up with others and activities like ; running , P.E....

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Extract

posted by ellie_bellie135

This is a short extract from the story I'm Penulisan (Symbus). If anda could please give me some feeeback on my style of Penulisan and possibly some things I could improve it would be a big help. Thank you. :D

‘This is Princess Alyssia Renesme of the api, kebakaran Kingdom.’ He paused pointedly. ‘I’ll sell her to anda for 300 emas pieces, and I think we both know that’s generous.’
‘You bastard!’ Alyss screeched.
‘Do anda think I’m a fool? There’s no way in hell that’s her. But I’ll give anda 50 silver pieces for her…We’ll have some fun anyway, wont we, love?’ He winked and chuckled....

Penulisan is Underated

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Still of the night ch.16

posted by TeamRosalieHale

16: Memories

As fast as master had made up it’s mind to wait until they were mortal again, it decided to send IT out to get her again. IT was not pleased with this decision, though IT did not let IT’s emotions show. Although IT was not fully healed, Dr. kren berkata it would be selamat, peti deposit keselamatan for IT to attempt another mission.
At the same time IT was preparing to leave again, Alice had safely reached the Denali clan and the carriage trooped on without Michael though Tristan, Jack, and David didn’t seem to care. Rosalie kept to herself though Jack stayed close.
Shortly before they crossed the border...