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This is A story of tragic, betrayal, and romance blooms through a time of desperate and dark times. This story has no relation to any actual historical events, and anything depicted in this story is not true and did not take place in actual French history. This story was made for entertainment purposes, and only a name of a few locations actually exists.



In the late 1800s, Alchemy was a major part of European Culture, but was prohibited sejak the Church, for Alchemic teachings went against God’s teachings and the Catholic beliefs. In a Small town off the borderlines of Paris France, a middle aged Alchemist, Victor Alexander Damè conducts strange experiments in secret, for his tests required human sacrifice, which was forbidden sejak all Alchemists alike and abolished use of alchemy sejak the church of Catholics. He hires exiles of the Country of France to find potential sacrifices, which mostly ranged from higher up classmen in which he had strife against to various members of the French Court.

His curiosity and lack of a Heir lead him to discover a peasant boy named Nathaniel and his older brother Simon. Both boys had been abandoned from their English father after their mother died when they were both fairly young, and ever since they lived on the streets relying on stolen Makanan and any selamat, peti deposit keselamatan water they could find. Nathaniel at the age of 10 had obtained the illness known as Thantosis, a serious disease that caused the slow decay of the inner organs.

Realizing that his baby brother’s time was short, Simon desperately tries to find shelter for the both of them sejak going around various houses in England trying to get families to take either both of them atau at least his ill ridden brother in. No one would take them in, in fear of catching the disease themselves, Simon pleaded for them to let them stay, but only found disappointment, One hari as Winter is fast approaching, Simon’s patience grows fairly thin with people as his brother starts to tunjuk lebih signs of the disease taking affect when Nathaniel starts to cough out large amounts of blood.

The boys soon gather attention from two fairly intoxicated men. They start to boast about their healthy sons, and pick at Nathaniel’s weakened and ill stricken state, out of anger and his weakened will power, Simon grabs a rock and pins the taller and larger man to the ground and with one hard swing, smashes the rock against his head, instantly killing him. The other man had escaped after this, and Simon, realizing what he had done, out of fear that he would be trialed and sentenced to Death sejak the British Police, he runs off with Nathaniel, stowing away on a Merchants Carriage heading to France where he manages to get a job in the small town of Damèberg.

For a time, the man Simon worked for let him and his younger brother stay in the bangsal in which Simon worked in the most as payment for Simon’s work. Simon is relieved of this case, feeling like he and his brother can live a semi normal life, without the struggles of life on the street. 5 years past and word starts reaching the French Court of a Boy who was a suspect of murder escaped England and was hiding somewhere in France.

Terrified of someone finding them, Simon runs away from the Farm, leaving a note, which simply stated his regrets, and his sincerest apology over the murder of Alfred J. Jones. Now back onto the streets, Nathaniel’s condition starts to worsen even lebih so then it had been, Simon tries desperately to keep his brother out of the harm of the crime-ridden streets of Damèberg. One night, drunken men, who claimed that they mencuri their money and food, corner Simon and Nathaniel; Simon tries to explain to them the situation. Not bothering to listen, one of the men hits Simon, and continues to beat him senseless while Nathaniel watches helplessly.


Simon facing the fact that this man was going to kill him, starts to accept death, for his death would redeem his sin of murdering Alfred, before the final blow the man is stopped sejak an elder gentleman, who the men recognize as Victor Damè. Victor saves the boys and brings them to his istana, castle on the borderline of Paris and Damèberg. Once Simon has recovered, he discovers that Victor is an Alchemist and he pleas for him to save his brother from the grips of the wretched disease, having known that Alchemist were known to do any miracles that succeeded the current knowledge of medical research.

Victor informs him that he cannot perform such Alchemy, but had something that might keep his brother alive for a bit longer then what he would have had. Simon Insisted that he gave him the antidote, proclaiming to do whatever he wanted him to do. Victor seizes the opportunity to make use of the young adult. For the seterusnya couple months Victor has Simon retrieve former convicts from the prison in Damèberg, Simon doesn’t soalan this request at first, but he grows lebih confused as time progresses.

One hari when returning from an errand, Simon notices his brother is nowhere to be found, he imminently confronts Victor, slightly angered with this, but calms down slightly when Victor states that he merely had brought Nathaniel into a room in the basement in preparation to receive the antidote. Simon grows slightly suspicious when he asks to see his brother and Victor states that Nathaniel was in no condition to be seen in, and soon he begins to investigate behind Victor’s back.

Simon having conducted research from every book he could find in Victor’s library, he comes to a horrifying conclusion. Victor was using the forbidden alchemy of Human Transmogrification in an attempt to create a relic of ancient times, which granted the user immortality. Realizing the danger he had put himself and his brother in, he realizes he must find his brother and escape.

Late at night Simon sneaks from his room and tries to make his way to the basement to retrieve Nathaniel, when Victor catches onto his intentions and imminently tries to kill him, Victor burns down the castle, trying to take Simon down with it. Simon barely escapes the wreckage engulfed in flames, and tries to find shelter in a near sejak forest.

Unsure of rather atau not his brother is alive; he collapses from exhaustion, once lebih ready to face his death. He wakes up several weeks later, finding himself in a unfamiliar room. He learns that a man named Alphonse Heisenberg, a German/French merchant who had connections with Victor, rescued him.

He informs Simon that ore then likely Victor had his brother locked up in his main building of operations, the deepest bowels of the Cathedral of Notre Dame in Paris. Urgent to get there Simon tries to make his way to the door, but is stopped sejak Alphonse, who states that he was in no condition to take on Victor. He went on to explain to Simon that Victor was far beyond a normal human, he was already on his way to immortality, and that it would take a equally skilled Alchemist to take him down.

Simon begs him to teach him Alchemy, Alphonse simply disagrees, not having any knowledge of Alchemy, but sends him off to a friend. Thus Simon spends 7 months training and learning Alchemy, under a elder Alchemist named Johann, who sought refuge in Berlin, Germany. Simon returns the utama of Alphonse, only to learn that he been kidnapped and taken as prisoner sejak Victor as described in a note left sejak Alphonse which stated that Victor had already gotten to his family.

Simon vows that with his newfound strengths he will redeem not only him, but save his brother and the man who saved his life, and to end Victor once and for all. During his travel to Paris, he runs into a young female, named Joanna, who he bumped into as she was running from the police due to that she had mencuri some roti from a local merchant. Reminded of how he used to live before Victor, he takes her and hides her in a near sejak Ally, and distracts the Police with his Alchemy allowing both to make a quick escape.

Realizing he was an Alchemist and his purpose she begs him to let her join, and it’s revealed that she is the only living daughter to Alphonse, who managed to escape Victor’s raid of their utama two months before. He reluctantly agrees, as he had no real choice and couldn’t leave her behind. Both take on the Journey to make their way to France, along the way getting into all sorts of trouble, with the German Police on their tails, they reach the outskirts of France, and take refuge in a near sejak Inn, and begin to plan out their means of attack. What awaits them at Notre Dame? Will they be Reunited with missing family? What happens when things get a little out of hand? Will Simon manage to see his brother Alive?
Chapter 2 Hue
Exo-Vampires

Everybody has their chances

Don’t touch me.
    The filthy half-vampire was sitting in the corner while I, me, out of all people... Vampires had to watch over the muddy thing. Thing is not a good word for the half-vampire, it is lebih of an IT. Maybe it does not need to live. Why? Why does it have to sleep like that. Sleeping is not normal if anda are a vampire. Stupid Half.
    “Ahh!” It screamed in its sleep.
    “Shut, UP!” I yelled, smacking it in the face. It opened its eyes, revealing a big bruise...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
3: Cry Little Sister

Rosalie and Alice had finished hunting and were slowly walking through the forest, a good 100, 150 miles from home. Alice turned her head to the darkening sky and tilted it carefully, listening almost. “It’s going to rain soon” she said, looking at Rosalie.
“What a surprise” she muttered, keeping her eyes forward. Alice sighed and Rosalie untied and retied her long blonde hair for what had to be the millionth time that day. “Ready?” she asked Alice, stopping and getting ready to run. She nodded and just before they were to take off, they heard a long high...
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The wind blowing through my hair was an exhilarating feeling. Jasper had taught me how to ride his bike a couple of months ago; I was surprised when he berkata yes because he was usually quite responsible. I hadn’t been much good at first but after a few hours I had got the hang of it, no one else knew that I could ride his bike and it was nice to be able to take it out for a private drive now and again.
When I reached Forks, instead of slowing down I sped up, making sure no one saw me. I parked outside the chemist and rushed inside. I knew that I had to do this but my stomach was filled with...
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posted by djsheshe
I know the way it eats your mind
The way your brain, eaten up
The one that leaves anda silent, blind
Long after you've had enough

I know the way it devours your thoughts
The way anda feel confused
It feels like a million knots
It leaves anda feeling used

I know the way it stabs your hati, tengah-tengah
The way it leaves anda here to bleed
It makes quite sure to tear anda apart
The time anda really need

I know the way it hurts your feelings
The way it leaves anda blue
anda say anda see, when not really seeing
anda say anda know, but that's not true

I know the way anda try and hide it
But then anda know you'll always find it
In the trees and in the gravel
This lie anda call friendship, I can't unravel.
posted by Twilightsauce
Hola!
Sorry this chapter has taken so long -my computer brok so I had to re write it!!!- but enjoy!
Amber

Running, breathing, living, hunting, fighting and Jake. These were the only five words running through my head right now. We hadn’t been running long and I was still at the front of the bulatan with Jake. As we ran I could almost smell the danger approaching us. I knew that the others were trying not to tunjuk their anxiety around me but I knew that these newborns weren’t as new any lebih and were becoming better fighters sejak the day.
“Stop,” I herd Alice call from behind me, “The newborns...
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 I very slightly opened my eyes to peek past my fear, watching those bright blue eyes take hold along my neck, then the silk lips press against my flesh.
I very slightly opened my eyes to peek past my fear, watching those bright blue eyes take hold along my neck, then the silk lips press against my flesh.
I was turned back in a time where I was extremely young, and didn't have the silver locks of hair that I have now. No, then I was a black soul, and even now I don't think there is any emotion in me. I was certain, even when I was human atau vampire, that I had a heart, but there was no certainty that I had pure emotions, anything that expressed a positive feeling towards another. Only when I realized those green eyes that resembled a cat's, lithe and ferocious but yet gentle, all at once, did I overcome the mirthing shadows in my hati, tengah-tengah and defined a brighter side of me, the light. It took me...
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posted by Fangirl99
As Vanessa walked into the spooky house,she looked for Dr.Vamp.

"hello?is anybody here?hello?"

"Good evening,"a voice called out sounding a lot like Dracula.

"huh?whos that?"Vanessa asked the voice with no body.

"Turn around."called the voice

so she did,and turned to a white man with very pale skin,and red lip stick

"come,sit."said the white man,pointing to his chair.

"Hello,i am Dr.Vamp.Who do we have here?"

"My name is Vanessa Colorado,and ive been experiencing strange behavior."

"mhm,like what?"

"well,at school today,i bit someones arm"

"Did blood come out"

"a little"

"were there marks?"

" yes,tiny ones,though."...
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Please read the other chapters and tell me whether this is any good atau not. And if anda don't like it, please give constructive critisicm.



The last of the makan malam, majlis makan malam guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have makan malam, majlis makan malam parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people atau parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries atau not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...
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Oh great it’s probably that creepy garbage man again. I thought. I turned around anyway, my eyes widened, I felt my face turn red, I couldn’t believe who was standing in front of me. I felt embarrassed. He just stared at me, with a look that just says hello. I opened my mouth thinking I was going to say something. Nothing came out I quickly shut my mouth and took a step back, about to walk away. “No, don’t run,” he said, his voice was so sweet.
“I… Umm…. Em…Eminem…uhh… hello?” I stuttered nervously with a stupid grin on my face, after I knew he wasn’t mad at me.
“Who...
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He looked at me with his eyes so soft and green,
My thoughts immediately became obscene.
He smiled and I turned all squishy inside,
My mind tried to run away and hide, but
My body couldn't refuse the notion
His eyes proofed my feelings otherwise.
We walked on the pantai hand in hand,
are feet delighted in the soft warm sand.
We could smell the sweet scent of desire on one another
As we drifted off into paradise.

The ocean was sparkling with delight, on this glorious afternoon.
The sun was set above the cloudless horizon. The summarily, briskly air filled my surroundings with temptation.
As I adventured...
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posted by ashesandwine
 The Universaty's perpustakaan (Biblioteca Joanina in portuguese)
The Universaty's Library (Biblioteca Joanina in portuguese)
This one is for just_bella, let go of the bad moments, hon! We need to enjoy the present, look out for the future and let the past in the past... Don't forget, but don't let it control you:D
Thanks to patrisha727, emmett4ever, and everyone for the support:D



"Catherine's POV"

The sun may shine through the day, the moon may light up the night but I'm still in the dark, I'm still looking for my shining light to guide me out of this misery, out of the dark...
Until our seterusnya rendezvous, I send anda a million kisses... Do not send me any back for they set my blood into flames...
Ever yours...



Three...
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 Sakura Haruno From Naruto Punching Naruto Uzumaki
Sakura Haruno From Naruto Punching Naruto Uzumaki
1.Lloyd2-I Just Got Real Close To Him In The Past 5 Hours.

2.Hidanfan-She's Real Funny, Cool To Chat In The Chatroom With, And She's Just Plain Awesome! We Even Created A Spot Called "Giovannimtz&Hidanfan" I Thought Of The Idea, She Made It! I Also Created Her A Spot Called "Hidanfan" She's Also Obsessed With Hidan From Naruto.

3.Akatsuki_Otaku-She Loves The Akatsuki From Naruto Like I Do. I Was Her First peminat And She's Fun To Chat With Like Hidanfan.

4.Bond_Of_Fury-I Also Got Close To Him In The Past 2 Hours, Lol.

5.Rusty746454-She Was My Bff On Fanpop But She Started To Stop Going On Fanpop...
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This is my take on love,it came to me about two years ago,then it was just a phrase,i came up with the poem later on.:)I hope anda like it,please Review it.Critisism is welcome-but no Flames pls.thanks bye!


Love Is A Tortured Soul

Love is a tortured soul.
Drenched in the bearing of it’s kind, and the lost.
For it gets Lost quite easily; it’s naïve and foolish-desperate.
Love is a tortured soul.
It’s always there, waiting for anda to find it in it’s dark dim home, longing for another of it’s kind to relate and confide to.
They come sometimes, atau so it thinks.
It’s always being teased by...
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Alex's hunter had a name. Only one person knew his name and that was his ex wife. He was utterly baffled that Alex wouldn't crack where his family was. This was going to be hard.
Just then the door opened revealing his ex wife Melinda and his daughter Melanie. Alex's hunter felt his anger rise up into his head
"Crap Melinda why can't anda bring her seterusnya year?" he roared raising his fists
Melinda became furious. He knew she would be coming! "Jerry calm yourself. It's your winter to take care of Melanie. anda don't want to talk to my lawyer again do you?" She asked eying him like she trapped him...
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