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This is A story of tragic, betrayal, and romance blooms through a time of desperate and dark times. This story has no relation to any actual historical events, and anything depicted in this story is not true and did not take place in actual French history. This story was made for entertainment purposes, and only a name of a few locations actually exists.



In the late 1800s, Alchemy was a major part of European Culture, but was prohibited sejak the Church, for Alchemic teachings went against God’s teachings and the Catholic beliefs. In a Small town off the borderlines of Paris France, a middle aged Alchemist, Victor Alexander Damè conducts strange experiments in secret, for his tests required human sacrifice, which was forbidden sejak all Alchemists alike and abolished use of alchemy sejak the church of Catholics. He hires exiles of the Country of France to find potential sacrifices, which mostly ranged from higher up classmen in which he had strife against to various members of the French Court.

His curiosity and lack of a Heir lead him to discover a peasant boy named Nathaniel and his older brother Simon. Both boys had been abandoned from their English father after their mother died when they were both fairly young, and ever since they lived on the streets relying on stolen Makanan and any selamat, peti deposit keselamatan water they could find. Nathaniel at the age of 10 had obtained the illness known as Thantosis, a serious disease that caused the slow decay of the inner organs.

Realizing that his baby brother’s time was short, Simon desperately tries to find shelter for the both of them sejak going around various houses in England trying to get families to take either both of them atau at least his ill ridden brother in. No one would take them in, in fear of catching the disease themselves, Simon pleaded for them to let them stay, but only found disappointment, One hari as Winter is fast approaching, Simon’s patience grows fairly thin with people as his brother starts to tunjuk lebih signs of the disease taking affect when Nathaniel starts to cough out large amounts of blood.

The boys soon gather attention from two fairly intoxicated men. They start to boast about their healthy sons, and pick at Nathaniel’s weakened and ill stricken state, out of anger and his weakened will power, Simon grabs a rock and pins the taller and larger man to the ground and with one hard swing, smashes the rock against his head, instantly killing him. The other man had escaped after this, and Simon, realizing what he had done, out of fear that he would be trialed and sentenced to Death sejak the British Police, he runs off with Nathaniel, stowing away on a Merchants Carriage heading to France where he manages to get a job in the small town of Damèberg.

For a time, the man Simon worked for let him and his younger brother stay in the bangsal in which Simon worked in the most as payment for Simon’s work. Simon is relieved of this case, feeling like he and his brother can live a semi normal life, without the struggles of life on the street. 5 years past and word starts reaching the French Court of a Boy who was a suspect of murder escaped England and was hiding somewhere in France.

Terrified of someone finding them, Simon runs away from the Farm, leaving a note, which simply stated his regrets, and his sincerest apology over the murder of Alfred J. Jones. Now back onto the streets, Nathaniel’s condition starts to worsen even lebih so then it had been, Simon tries desperately to keep his brother out of the harm of the crime-ridden streets of Damèberg. One night, drunken men, who claimed that they mencuri their money and food, corner Simon and Nathaniel; Simon tries to explain to them the situation. Not bothering to listen, one of the men hits Simon, and continues to beat him senseless while Nathaniel watches helplessly.


Simon facing the fact that this man was going to kill him, starts to accept death, for his death would redeem his sin of murdering Alfred, before the final blow the man is stopped sejak an elder gentleman, who the men recognize as Victor Damè. Victor saves the boys and brings them to his istana, castle on the borderline of Paris and Damèberg. Once Simon has recovered, he discovers that Victor is an Alchemist and he pleas for him to save his brother from the grips of the wretched disease, having known that Alchemist were known to do any miracles that succeeded the current knowledge of medical research.

Victor informs him that he cannot perform such Alchemy, but had something that might keep his brother alive for a bit longer then what he would have had. Simon Insisted that he gave him the antidote, proclaiming to do whatever he wanted him to do. Victor seizes the opportunity to make use of the young adult. For the seterusnya couple months Victor has Simon retrieve former convicts from the prison in Damèberg, Simon doesn’t soalan this request at first, but he grows lebih confused as time progresses.

One hari when returning from an errand, Simon notices his brother is nowhere to be found, he imminently confronts Victor, slightly angered with this, but calms down slightly when Victor states that he merely had brought Nathaniel into a room in the basement in preparation to receive the antidote. Simon grows slightly suspicious when he asks to see his brother and Victor states that Nathaniel was in no condition to be seen in, and soon he begins to investigate behind Victor’s back.

Simon having conducted research from every book he could find in Victor’s library, he comes to a horrifying conclusion. Victor was using the forbidden alchemy of Human Transmogrification in an attempt to create a relic of ancient times, which granted the user immortality. Realizing the danger he had put himself and his brother in, he realizes he must find his brother and escape.

Late at night Simon sneaks from his room and tries to make his way to the basement to retrieve Nathaniel, when Victor catches onto his intentions and imminently tries to kill him, Victor burns down the castle, trying to take Simon down with it. Simon barely escapes the wreckage engulfed in flames, and tries to find shelter in a near sejak forest.

Unsure of rather atau not his brother is alive; he collapses from exhaustion, once lebih ready to face his death. He wakes up several weeks later, finding himself in a unfamiliar room. He learns that a man named Alphonse Heisenberg, a German/French merchant who had connections with Victor, rescued him.

He informs Simon that ore then likely Victor had his brother locked up in his main building of operations, the deepest bowels of the Cathedral of Notre Dame in Paris. Urgent to get there Simon tries to make his way to the door, but is stopped sejak Alphonse, who states that he was in no condition to take on Victor. He went on to explain to Simon that Victor was far beyond a normal human, he was already on his way to immortality, and that it would take a equally skilled Alchemist to take him down.

Simon begs him to teach him Alchemy, Alphonse simply disagrees, not having any knowledge of Alchemy, but sends him off to a friend. Thus Simon spends 7 months training and learning Alchemy, under a elder Alchemist named Johann, who sought refuge in Berlin, Germany. Simon returns the utama of Alphonse, only to learn that he been kidnapped and taken as prisoner sejak Victor as described in a note left sejak Alphonse which stated that Victor had already gotten to his family.

Simon vows that with his newfound strengths he will redeem not only him, but save his brother and the man who saved his life, and to end Victor once and for all. During his travel to Paris, he runs into a young female, named Joanna, who he bumped into as she was running from the police due to that she had mencuri some roti from a local merchant. Reminded of how he used to live before Victor, he takes her and hides her in a near sejak Ally, and distracts the Police with his Alchemy allowing both to make a quick escape.

Realizing he was an Alchemist and his purpose she begs him to let her join, and it’s revealed that she is the only living daughter to Alphonse, who managed to escape Victor’s raid of their utama two months before. He reluctantly agrees, as he had no real choice and couldn’t leave her behind. Both take on the Journey to make their way to France, along the way getting into all sorts of trouble, with the German Police on their tails, they reach the outskirts of France, and take refuge in a near sejak Inn, and begin to plan out their means of attack. What awaits them at Notre Dame? Will they be Reunited with missing family? What happens when things get a little out of hand? Will Simon manage to see his brother Alive?
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Dawn’s p.o.v

“What?’ I asked, closing my mouth. He smiled, sending a shiver down my spine. “I need to speak to my new slayer to be” he told us. Rebecca eyed him. “Why, we have taught her the basic and the rules” she said, he now looked annoyed. Why was he doing this? I thought to myself. “Now, young ladies I would like to talk to her in private” he said, but before we could go Billy had walked in. “Derek” he simply said. My father turned to him. “Billy, how have anda been?” he asked. Billy snickered. “Just great, now what do anda want with Lilly?” he asked, my father...
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I Wake up. I see nothing but my pale white ceiling, I want to stay here, but then I hear my name. I rush up and go to the door but then I look down and see what I am wearing nothing but my under wear and a white singlet. I get my dressing gaun and put my arms through the sleeves. I walk down the stairs and see my sister, her face is filled with anger I suddenly regret coming down. I stop walking once I reach the bottom of the stairs she walks up to me and smiled. I am confused until I realise that Georgia is here. Georgia is the goddess of music, hundreds of years lalu she was the outcast, her...
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posted by funnyshawna
Life is an iPod. The different melodies, the ups and the downs, the changes in tempo, every song, and every experience differs a little from the next. Start with the tinkling bells, meaningless lyrics, and soothing sounds of early childhood. Everything is simple; repetition, a song meant for young ears, nothing to think about, nothing to ponder, just to breathe and to live. One song flows into the next, changing subtly, barely noticed. Then the words begin to gather lebih depth; the beat becomes a little faster, a little louder. The Muzik plays, slow and monotonous during the school day, dragging...
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Everyone knows no one is normal. Everyone knows everyone is the same too. But do anda know what it's like to have nothing normal about you? From the way anda dress from the way anda talk? I do. My name is Elizabeth Mills. This is the story of my life. It all started when I was five. Thats the hari I became the opposite of normal.

I was just a little girl. I was in my own world. Thats a lie. Every little girl is in a world of her own. I acted as if I was five years older than I should be. I'm not normal, remember? Well I was at my Grandmothers house to spend the weekend. My cousin always prefered...
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Who is Mary Sue, anda ask?

She is a pest, a scourge, a CURSE upon the world of fiction; a dull, cliche character who mostly invades the peminat fiction universe (especially in fandoms like Lord of the Rings atau Harry Potter), but can also be found in original work, TV shows, books, movies, etc. In peminat fiction, she's usually the fangirl's way of inserting herself in the story and pairing herself up with the cutest/hottest character. This infamous evil can be identified sejak the following traits:

1: She is stunningly/unusually beautiful. Oh she may deny it, claiming to be a "plain Jane" and modestly deflecting...
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added by amutokitty
Scott is my kegemaran boy character in total drama revenge of the island and Courtney is my kegemaran character in all total drama, so I like this couple better but I was once a Duncney peminat so... enjoy!

Scott: I wasn't scared to jump off the cliff into the water with sharks! I was just thinking that I would scare the pee out of the sharks, and make the challenge easier. Well, that's not my plan! Hehehe

Challenge ended elimination time

The villainous vultures won so the heroic hamsters had to vote and Courtney and Lindsay were at risk, but Lindsay got the boot

After 3 challenges Courtney got switched...
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Prologue

Slowly consciousness came back to me. My head was pounding, it felt like it was going to explode. Especially at the back of my head something was wrong. I knew it, I felt it, yet I couldn’t get my head around how I got it exactly. I tried to get my hand up to touch my head and make out what was going on exactly, but soon found out I couldn’t get it up. It was strapped onto something. Slowly I took a deep breath, held it and let it go. The pounding didn’t stop, but it did help me to be able to start make out some stuff around me. I couldn’t open my eyes yet, but my ears gave...
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posted by ZekiYuro
Lisa Tyler was weary after a long,hard hari at the pottery factory where she works.But as she approached her utama in the English city of Stoke-on-Trent,her hati, tengah-tengah lightened:soon she would be having a nice cup of tea,putting her feet up and watching Friends,her favourite TV series.But first,she needed to change out of her work clothes and pick up her 3-year-old son from his grandmother's house nearby.

As Lisa walked up her garden path,she noticed a light flashing on and off in an upstairs bedroom.A shiver went down her back.What if it was a burglar?Quietly,she crept round to the back of the house...
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posted by ZekiYuro
The Japanese film director Hayao Miyazaki is one of the greatest animators in modern cimema.Films like Heidi,and Marco,3000 miles in cari of mother have made him famous all over the world.

In 1971 Miyazaki left Toei Douga animasi and worked with several other companies.He made Heidi,and Marco,3000 miles in cari of mother wich were shown as TV series all over the world.

In 1952 they moved back to Tokyo.When Hayao was at secondary school he saw his first cartoon film,The Legend of The White Snake.He felt in Cinta with the heroine,Pai-nyan and cried all night.It was this film which started...
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Chapter 1: Annabeth

Annabeth paced up and down the deck of the Argo||. For the first time ever in living mermory, her mind was a mess. Being the brightest daughter of Athena, Annabeth was used to being calm and collected. But that was a thing of the past. Ever since Percy went missing, her mind and emotions had been going crazy. Annabeth felt like crying. Percy. Her brave, sweet, occasionally smart, seaweed brain boyfriend. He went missing eight long, nightmare filled months ago. She could still remember the last night she saw him. They had finished makan malam, majlis makan malam sejak the campfire and were walking along...
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Night arrives once more. I notice that my hands and feet are tied up. As i look up there is a dark figure holding a gun to my head. I ask him what he wants and why he has me tied up, he balas "I want the powers that anda posses inside of you. The abilities that your soul has. i would like to suggest that anda agree with me and hand over the powers." Confused about all of this i ask him about what he is talking about. he jawapan "You have powers kid. The less anda know the better. Hand them over wilingly atau i will have no choice but to force anda to hand them over." With me replying no to cooperating...
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 Hmm...James, bringing back any memories-Lulu
Hmm...James, bringing back any memories-Lulu
____after school_____getting ready in Lulu's bathroom
I was listening to "Bella's Lullaby"from my faveorite Robert Pattinson flicks.It was blasting through the speakers.Andria was applying baby blue eyeshadow.I was putting on mascara.I popped my lips when the song was over.The seterusnya song that came up was Ke$ha's "Blah Blah Blah".I looked over towards Andria.We loved this song.We started singing.Halfway through the song I heard my phone Singing "Fearless"by Taylor Swift.That meant it was Rob.I picked it up and put it on speaker."Hey Rob!"I said."Hey,Lu."he said."Andria's here too."He chuckled."Cool.Hey...
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Chapter Two

James flopped down seterusnya to Sirius with a sigh. ”For Merlin's sake, how does she do it?”
After six years, the Marauders knew not to interrupt when James started going on and on (and on) about Lily. “I mean, I didn't think it was possible for her to be lebih attractive than she was last tahun – remember last year?” The Marauders nodded. “Yeah, well, Merlin knows it's about twice that now. I mean, she's just kind of grown into herself a little, yeah? And – and – I could go on all hari –“
“Please don't, mate,” Sirius said, effectively stopping James' rant. The not...
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posted by tayandkris4evr
I woke up feeling groggy. My eyes were swollen from crying, and my head felt like it'd been hit with a sledge hammer a couple of times. Niki's head was on my shoulder, his blonde hair was dry now, and his eyes were also swollen and pink.
I slowly put Niki's head on a soft trash bag then I scooted out from the hollow tree's cover. Standing there in the forest made me realize something. It made me realize that sometimes Death brings sadness and sometimes it brings a reason, a meaning, atau a story. Niki berkata that he'd burned the tree... with his hands. But, I'm not sure if that's true at all....
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posted by RanmaRaj
I wrote this Song when my girl broke off with me

My college's band berkata it was too boring and told me to write another

I'd shared it with Kathy(Lilacool)
She berkata she liked it......Thanks Kathy


In the center of my heart
there is a deep pain
as if struck sejak a dart
blood is all going drain

but wait a minute
am i..............?

'tis there all hari and night
either asleep atau awake
doesn't leave what I might
kick it atau give it a shake

but on saat thought
am i..............?


Lil puzzling is it's reason
someone once lived there
may be till sebelumnya season
she was my heart's only heir

though she is long gone
my heart...
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